Anna Swift

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Intriguing, but Requires Editing

Any story with great potential needs edits. Without them, words are incohesive on the page and become a tangled mess. Characters themselves need to be more developed and fleshed out. This story needs heavy revising and editing, and I hope the author contains the perseverance​ to continue their writing journey despite what I feel in their writing style and technical skill.

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