Annelien Moller

South Africa

A member of the writers addiction club.

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What a gift to read!

This is brilliant work, well done, I was going on the journey and it was so much fun. Hope to read more soon.
Ok so the imagery, it is evocative and stunning. I love your characters they are strong and vibrant. You have a wonderful voice as a writer. I can highly recommend this. Now write the rest my curiosity is killing me!
XOXO

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Unexpected little gem

Hi, I try very hard to read the work of each person that follows me or adds my book to their reading lists and especially for those who comment or review my own work. I go as fast as I can. So I got to your story today.

I know it is raw and there is a lot of work for editing there, but the bones of a truly wonderful story are in it. I think you might have something that you can turn into magical in this story. I don't know if you know or are already a member but NANOWRIMO is kind of a place where you could take this story you have here and turn it into a full novel. If you are not a member of NANOWRIMO go check it out and sign up. This story deserves to be written it is that good.

That being said it is important to look at spelling and grammar and such. Me I suck at those things because English is not my first language so I use the editor called Ginger. It is great and helps me with finding mistakes and it also suggests how to rephrase a sentence or how to restructure to long sentences. There is sometimes more power in breaking a sentence down.

I do hope you keep writing this story I would very much like to read it fully developed!
Great story!
Good luck you can do it!

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Blue

Very nice work, I like your story arc there are some small spelling and grammar issues nothing major. I feel a connection to your story even though I think your target audience is for someone a little younger than me. I recommended your story to my teenagers for a read. They enjoyed it immensely. So good job!

They felt engaged and they identified with your characters. As one of my kids said, its like they are the group of friends that hang out next to my group of friends.

And to tell you the truth, getting teenagers to put stuff down and read your story is an accomplishment on its own you can be very proud of!

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Who knew a semi Demon could be so much fun

Well done,
Your story is engaging and keeps the reader interested. It is very much a moving story, not a sit still story. Your Character is unique and I love the idea of Demon Dusted. It's wonderfully creative.
Your Characters are well developed and their personalities come through beautifully. I enjoyed reading this tremendously I do hope to read more from you. I think you have a wonderfully creative and fun voice as a writer.
Excellent job and I can highly recommend this to anyone! You are a gifted storyteller!
Thank you for letting me read it.

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Brilliant does not cover how good this is

So I love it. I love the story, I love the energy, I love the characters. You made me laugh, you intrigued me and made me fall in love. Is there anything better than a great love story? You nailed it! Well done.

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Hiro

War is not an easy story to tell, the horror that happens cuts all, Whether we want to acknowledge it or not. The things that happen in war can break us in ways we could never imagine. This book crafts the heartbreak of war in the first chapters. It sweeps you along and makes you weep in sorrow for what man will do to each other in the name of war.

The pain nearly unbearable when this book takes you on a second journey that speaks of love. Of acceptance, of forgiveness or healing. Read this, it will remind you of humanity at its best overcoming and not bowing down to humanity at its worse.

John K Sutherland, this was a remarkable book. Thank you.

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Jack the Ripper!!??!

This is wonderfully different. I loved it! Imagine having the opportunity to talk to all theses Historical figures! It's so much fun. Did you capture the Inspiration Fairy and are holding her hostage? Because really this is astonishing. I was having so much fun with this can't wait to read the next chapter.

Now off to go read another of your stories!

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The Millenium Wolves

There is this little thing known as work. Terrible thing a person must engage in to ensure there is food on the table and a roof over your head...

Then I started your book and forgot all about work. In fact, this is so good I would live under a tree and eat grass as long as I could read more of it! It is wonderful. There are a few typos but not much, mostly there is just brilliance and hotness and well yumminess. Thank you for writing this I feel privileged to have read it!

I would buy this book and put it on my bookshelf with pride and re-read it with pleasure many many times.
Well done!

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