Anne Marshall

Alexander

Fantasy writer. World creator. Skull collector.

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A lovely read!

With the amount ready to read, this story has a great start to it! The preface was good, although it gave away a few things before I had the chance to read it, but I wasn't mad about it! Even with the amount of information given in the blurb, you are still captivated by the story. I really enjoyed the writing style, I am big on this genre (I write and read it) and was taken in by the author's style of writing. However, I would say, even with this story not being done yet, that going through and fixing up some of the major grammar things that take away from the reading experience. I am well aware of the need to finish a project before getting all of that done, but I do recommend fixing up some of it so new readers can enjoy it once through and then going back for the big stuff. Overall an interesting, intriguing, promising start to a potentially great novel! Can't wait to read more!

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Fantasy Reader Turned Western Lover!

While I am not usually a western reader, I enjoyed this story in a lot of ways. The unique characters and the way the author weaves the scenery made me feel like I was there with them, as if I knew them by words alone. There is this otherworldly feeling to the characters, as if they are greater than their human bodies, like they are destined for something greater. I like that the MC, Bill, had his own past, his own demons but he was willing to go so far for the others that it shrouded him with this grace that I can't describe. I enjoyed the storytelling but some of the grammar mistakes made me have to reread a few lines here and there. It wasn't so bad that I wanted to drop the story and not continue.You feel a real connection to the characters, you root for the good guys and you want the rotten ones to get what they deserve - something very true to classic westerns.

This is a suspenseful and wonderfully written story. With each characters stories, there's a need to know more about them, and the author give you just that. This was a lovely story, and with some polishing, it could be even greater!

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Nostalgia Meets Feel Good


Jo Abrigo delivers an in depth, heart wrenching story that dives into the mind and pulls at your heartstrings. You'll be reminded of the trials and tribulations delivered in high school and the striking clarity that comes after life changing moments. The relationships and bonds formed through the story will have you smiling and wishing you were next to your best friend again, reminiscing about the old days.

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