A great story!
What intrigued me: the direction this plot takes is a very unique and singular one. I’m one to write polyamorous relationships so it’s very refreshing to see another fellow author dive into those waters as well. I’m not poly myself but I love the “why choose when you can have both” trope in both my reading and writing. I must say, I do appreciate the LGBT aspects of this novel cause they’re so damn vivid and the relationships are actually CUTE!! Again, very well written in terms of the relationship dynamics and how well it works with the plot.
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The plot’s best aspects: Now, I’m a fan of supernatural I’m sure we all can agree if you take a peek at my profile. Shifters, angels, demons, you name it I write it. This story does an incredible job of introducing us to the supernatural world. It takes a minute and of course it cuts off as this is a sample. Chapter 13 and 18 throw me off a bit because it’s such a huge jump in the storyline but I can totally understand the decision to include them. Also, I must say the erotic aspects of this story are insanely good!! I find myself really in the moment when their intimate scenes pop up and holy do I need a water break haha
Any afterthoughts I can share with the author: I’m no editor, nor do I portray myself as one, so when I review books on free apps K usually stray away from pointing out any mistakes. Now with all of that said I didn’t find any mistakes as I was too enthralled by the story to focus on those technicalities. I mean who geos into a story searching for the mistakes? You’re just going to end up ruining a potentially great book for yourself. Anyway, I noticed the author gave us a sample of this story, not sure if it’s a WIP she’s planning on publishing, but I must tell her now… DO IT!! If you’re planning on self publishing I promise this book will do great with some marketing toward the correct audience. Also, a great cover would do this story wonders! You can get a free cover from a shop on Wattpad! They have some amazing designers.
(Ps. So sorry this review took forever. Busy busy woman around here haha hope the review helps in any way. Really enjoyed this story!)