AquaWStraw

My review

I just finished reading your story and I should say I was quite interested at first and through most of it. I very much liked your writing style and I should say it is one I do prefer reading. It could clearly reflect a mirror in my head although I would have liked to know how Nora looks like in your head. The thing that stroke in the plot was its smooth understand although you kept it hanging until the end, although it could have been better. You had made some grammatical mistake here and there but I don't think I caught many. Overall I enjoyed it and I am being completely honest. I don't do reviews and am no expert, but I appreciated your story enough to take time and write this.
Thank you

Quite Good

Honestly I haven't read the whole thing yet but I can say I can grasp pretty well the scenes. The development of the personages is interesting and consistent. The setting brings in a innovative feeling to the story. The only thing is the beginning is a bit ambiguous and with a few grammatical mistakes. Overall I really enjoy reading it. Keep the good work up!