Ku. Lekhaka

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She/her|Sophomore in high school who likes writing~ Wattpad below

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Wolf Not Wolf

I like the story so far, and there are only a few things I would change. The grammar isn't 100% correct but it's only small mistakes, so it's okay. Inkitt is a much hard platform to navigate compared to Wattpad, and I know this because I'm also a Wattpad writer. However, the characters are well-written and that's very important in stories. If you fix the small grammar mistakes the story will be even better!
Personally, I think the writing seems a little more immature, but that's fine because none of us are mature adults. If you want to capture more readers, see if you can avoid dictating Hayley's thoughts so specifically when she's not actually having thoughts.
Overall, I really enjoyed it! You can message me on my wall or go to my Wattpad account in my bio if you want to talk more!

Also sorry for the long review

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WolfHeart

This was incredible! Usually, I'm not a fan of werewolf stories because of how popular the concept is, but this was creative and gripping! I loved the story, and the chapters were a perfect length for me. The grammar is also great, only a few things could be changed to make the reading smoother. It was very descriptive making you feel like you were with the characters at every moment. I would recommend this to my friends who don't even like writing.

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Noice first chapter

Nice writing! Descriptive with only a few grammar mistakes, and I’m not one to talk when it comes to on that. I’ve been looking for some good fics and I already found one <3

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