Ku. Lekhaka

Awesome!

I love the concept! Limited time is something many people think about but we forget to enjoy the moments we have quite often. The grammar issue is that you switch from present to past tense so it’s a bit confusing when you read, but I love the plot! First person also means you have to be more descriptive but so far I think you’re doing awesome <3

ATrip To Remember

I want to start with, I absolutely loved this. The description was great, the internal dialogue was relatable, and it was a heartwarming story! I also liked out this was a polyamorous relationship that was not purely sex but also emotionally connecting the three individuals. The only issue I have is that there are a decent amount of grammar mistakes, but that can be fixed with an online editor.

Overall this was really fun to read!

Love it so far...

It's a great plot! However, there are quite a few grammar mistakes. You're writing style is a little hard to follow because you switch between past and present tense, but I'm intrigued! I will definitely keep reading this story as you continue to update it! Nice job.

WolfHeart

This was incredible! Usually, I'm not a fan of werewolf stories because of how popular the concept is, but this was creative and gripping! I loved the story, and the chapters were a perfect length for me. The grammar is also great, only a few things could be changed to make the reading smoother. It was very descriptive making you feel like you were with the characters at every moment. I would recommend this to my friends who don't even like writing.

Noice first chapter

Nice writing! Descriptive with only a few grammar mistakes, and I’m not one to talk when it comes to on that. I’ve been looking for some good fics and I already found one <3