Ku. Lekhaka

Awesome!

I love the concept! Limited time is something many people think about but we forget to enjoy the moments we have quite often. The grammar issue is that you switch from present to past tense so it’s a bit confusing when you read, but I love the plot! First person also means you have to be more descriptive but so far I think you’re doing awesome <3

Great!

The plot is interesting but somewhat hard to keep up with because it constantly switches from past to present tenses. It would be helpful if you could italicize her inner thoughts so we know when she is thinking versus narrating. Other than that I think it's pretty good! Keep up the great work!

ATrip To Remember

I want to start with, I absolutely loved this. The description was great, the internal dialogue was relatable, and it was a heartwarming story! I also liked out this was a polyamorous relationship that was not purely sex but also emotionally connecting the three individuals. The only issue I have is that there are a decent amount of grammar mistakes, but that can be fixed with an online editor.

Overall this was really fun to read!

Enjoying it

I like what you having going so far, however, it's hard to rate the plot with only two chapters. There are a few grammar mistakes that can easily be fixed with an online editor or if you proofread each chapter a few more times before submitting it. I really like your writing style, it's extremely descriptive! I'll definitely keep reading as you continue you update your story, so keep of the good work <3

Love it so far...

It's a great plot! However, there are quite a few grammar mistakes. You're writing style is a little hard to follow because you switch between past and present tense, but I'm intrigued! I will definitely keep reading this story as you continue to update it! Nice job.

I like it

It's a nice plot, and I think the story will definitely become popular. However, there are quite a few grammar mistakes. I'm also a Wattpad writer. Writing on Inkitt is a little different. You don't have to place trigger warnings since the settings in your story will allow you to mark it as 18+ and then pick which mature themes will be involved. Other than the grammar mistakes it's great! I really appreciated the little intro as well, because it was a nice way of clearing up any questions about this made-up world! Keep up the good work!

Wolf Not Wolf

I like the story so far, and there are only a few things I would change. The grammar isn't 100% correct but it's only small mistakes, so it's okay. Inkitt is a much hard platform to navigate compared to Wattpad, and I know this because I'm also a Wattpad writer. However, the characters are well-written and that's very important in stories. If you fix the small grammar mistakes the story will be even better!
Personally, I think the writing seems a little more immature, but that's fine because none of us are mature adults. If you want to capture more readers, see if you can avoid dictating Hayley's thoughts so specifically when she's not actually having thoughts.
Overall, I really enjoyed it! You can message me on my wall or go to my Wattpad account in my bio if you want to talk more!

Also sorry for the long review

WolfHeart

This was incredible! Usually, I'm not a fan of werewolf stories because of how popular the concept is, but this was creative and gripping! I loved the story, and the chapters were a perfect length for me. The grammar is also great, only a few things could be changed to make the reading smoother. It was very descriptive making you feel like you were with the characters at every moment. I would recommend this to my friends who don't even like writing.

Noice first chapter

Nice writing! Descriptive with only a few grammar mistakes, and I’m not one to talk when it comes to on that. I’ve been looking for some good fics and I already found one <3