Salem

Young writer who can't resist a supernatural twist.

Not following anyone yet

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Interesting

I like the quote in the prologue. This story is very interesting. A page turner.

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Nice detail.

Albeit hard to follow; I really like your use of detail. I've never read a zombie book before so it's very new/refreshing to me. Your characters have their very own personality. Nice writing.

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Lots of detail.

(I had to stop and review before I lost my train of thought.) So much detail I felt like I was the one being told I had cancer. The story really hooks you. It's refreshing to see a MC with a fatal illness -- if that makes sense. I can't wait to finish this. Great job!

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Amateur-ish

The writing in some areas is very amateur. Pedestrian, even. This just seems like a cliché love-story where the boy makes her all better to me. Not a story I'd read typically. But a small part of me wants to see the journey.

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Filled with potential.

The grammar is a but off putting. The descriptions are very full, putting the reader right at the scene. I personally enjoy the royalty aspect. Is Xander shell-shocked or something? Where is his happiness. As a selective mute, I always enjoy seeing a mute character in stories, so I commend and thank you for that.

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Not my kind of story

Very intriguing character voice. I especially liked the fourth wall breaks in the prologue. I'm curious, but it's not very attention holding.

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Interesting

Interesting. Want to see more, where it goes.

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Very enticing

I'm barely through the first chapter. I HAD to stop and review.

It is so captivating, the details place you right at the scene, and the character is very realistic and relatable. A lot of people want to just fly under the radar like Salem.

I like magic stories and Salem is far more advanced. I wonder why she's in that class, but also doesn't use her magic🤔

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Time After

Your writing style is very captivating. Although it is hard to follow who's speaking at times and what's going on.

The character voice is realistic; the struggles of a writer. We all know and relate to finding the right/perfect sentence. The characters themselves are very fluid, realistic.

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Intriguing

Not really a book I'd read. It's hard to follow it/who is who or who is talking.

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