ArtistAtHeart

I love writing romance, reading romance, and I'm a hopeless romantic

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Meh

The plot and everything is great. The writing and story itself isn't. It's all over the place. And it's random. "Break mom and dad up. No. Life will be hell." Then all he does is have sex and stuff in front of her..? But then saves her and acts jealous while telling her they're related and that's wrong and creepy. Like they need a steady growth. Not changing their minds every other chapter. And the characters need to be built up more. There's nothing there. What's Reid like? The sister? What's her name? I don't remember seeing a name. What's the mom like? How about going into their past about the dad more. What's Henry like? And not to mention Reid was supposed to pick her up so when her mom said to meet Reid she was already supposed to have met him and why was he in a meeting if he knew he had to pick her up and why was that detail forgotten???

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Love It

What isn't to love? A werewolf book that isn't obsessed with sex. It's so good and I really hope it gets finished because it's my favorite book. Like seriously it's so good. I love it.

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One Chapter?

Literally has one Chapter and says it's "completed" which was a let down as I was excited to start a new book. If you aren't going to finish it, might as well remove it.

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Captivating

It's pretty good and captivates you although there are some flaws like Dylan making the same mistakes over and over and Leila trying to do the same thing to fix a mistake. There isn't much growth with the characters but it is a good story overall. Some grammatical errors and some things are repeated a little too much like mind link, you can just put it in italics and people will understand what's going on instead of saying 'using the mind link' almost every single time. Overall an interesting story.

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