Ashley

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A riveting tale of living life to the fullest

This was an interesting tale that gave someone who had lived a life, get some time back to live again at it's fullest. It's a combination of reminding people to enjoy life now because you don't know how it will end but to also remember your own actions can affect others lives, and not always in a positive way.

I love the writing style but I would just look over some of your sentences to make sure your commas aren't stopping the flow to much. Every coma is a pause and sometimes it kills the movement in your story.

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