Ashley Phoenix

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Fantastic read.

This was a truly fun read. I sincerely hope there are additional books to come. I'm sure I speak for others as I say we really can't wait to see more from this pack, the children, family, and friends. It was a great blend of emotions as we progressed through the story with suspense, action, mystery, heartbreak, love, and laughter filling the pages it was hard to put down. I literally couldn't stop reading every chance I got. Well done, beyond the grammatical errors this was fantastic.

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Fun read

I really enjoyed this story. I loved the family interactions, the mate binds, the humor inserted to break things up, the suspense, and Ella was fantastic. The ending felt rushed and not enough time was given to the capture and sentencing after all the time and anguish suffered. I feel let down that we didnt get to go on that journey and get to feel justice was served. Also, what happened to her baby? Big disappointing question there...

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Fun story so far

I like that Scarlett has come into her own and is a fighter. I'm not overly fond of her being so weak as to push aside her bf to do a family dinner with her mate. If she really loved her bf she never should have done that so the backbone I felt she gained is washed out a bit by that decision. However, I am hoping for some kind of redemption and maybe him actually getting his mate back and opening Scarlett up for a potential reunion that isn't cringe worthy.

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