Austin Terry

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Interesting

I find the plot to be quite interesting. Military fiction is one of my favorite genres. I hope to see this story in it’s completion. It is definitely captivating and filled with suspense. Great job thus far.

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Great so far.

The story so far is great. I love the suspense, and build up of the beginning of the story. Definitely an interesting plot. Minus some dialogue, and punctuation errors the story flows nicely. The small errors do not distract from the story. I’m really curious to see where this story goes. Definitely a great read for anyone in sci-fi. I hope to see this book in it’s completion.

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Great!

I’ve completed reading the first chapter, and it has me wanting to keep going. The beginning was fast paced, and kept me engaged in the world the writer painted. It is definitely something worth reading. I look forward to seeing this book in it’s entirety. The writer has a unique, and captivating writing style.

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Great

The story definitely packs a punch. Great detail, and definitely great dialogue. Please do let me know when it is finished.

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Stellar

This is an awesome sci-fi read. It reminds me of a Star Wars, Star Trek, and Stargate. To me it’s a mix of all three, but totally different it stands apart. Very detailed, and an extensive view of character development, and the world the writer has created. By far one of the best sci-fi short stories that I have read. Great job, and look forward to seeing more of your writing. This is a must read for people who are into Star Trek, etc.

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Excellent

This is a great story. I’ve only read the first two chapters, and it has left me wanting to read more. The plot is very interesting, and the main character not being able to remember things builds good suspense. This is a must read for people who like fantasy. The writer uses great detail, and really paints a vivid picture. I look forward to reading the rest of the book.

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Great thus far

The story is definitely interesting. I can see it developing into a really great book. The writing style is different, but after reading further you get used to it. The story itself is engaging, but I find it hard to get past the dialogue not having quotations. Overall it makes for a good read.

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Different

This is an enjoyable story, but a little different than what I’m used to. I found it to be engaging, and full of detail. It does a good job of showing the emotions of the character, and his internal battle with himself.

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Great story.

The story is great, and tends to keep the reader engaged. The writing style is a little different than I’m used to, but getting past that the plot is interesting. The writer adds enough detail to describe the characters emotions. The story flows pretty well. The chapters are on the shorter side making you want to read more.

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Great story from what I’ve read

The plot is quite interesting. Although their is a lot of werewolf novels out there this one stands out. The writing style is unique, and flows pretty well. It’s a bit of a slow start, but once you get to the 2nd chapter it picks up. If your into werewolf novels this is a must read.

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Great!

Great story so far. The writing style is flawless, and engaging. Definitely a great start to a Sci-fi novel. I look forward to seeing the rest of the story unfold.

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Excellent!

The plot is well thought out, and the story is very engaging. The writers style keeps the reader engaged. I can’t put it down. It’s rare I find something I just can’t stop reading. The part of the main character challenging a god is very compelling. The writer paints a clear picture of the world they have created. Other than a few errors with some wording which is not to distracting the writing flows very well. Great story so far. Thank you for sharing.

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Interesting

Very interesting read thus far. The beginning is a little slow, but the writer paints a very descriptive picture of the world he has created. Once you get to chapter 2 it starts to pick up. The plot seems to be well thought out, at least from what I’ve read so far. It is definitely worth giving a read.

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Brilliant

Having read the first chapter, so far. I found the story to be very engaging, and well written. The detail shows true passion for what is being written. I look forward to reading more when I have the time. Thanks for such an enjoyable story.

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Enticing

I have read the first chapter, and well it’s a great read. I found it to be quite entertaining. I hope to see this book finished. Looking forward to reading it in its entirety.

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Interesting Story so far

It is an interesting story that seems like it will develop into a good book. Looking forward to reading the next parts of the story.

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Intriguing

The story from what I’ve read so far is quite intriguing. It definitely keeps you captured in the plot. It is more on the erotic side, but not overpowering. Great story.

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Great story

I’ve read the first few chapters, and find the story to be quite interesting. I look forward to reading it in it’s entirety when I have the time. Definitely something to read if you love game of thrones or lord of the rings.

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Captivating

I really enjoyed what I’ve read so far. The beginning is probably by far the best opening to a book I’ve ever read. Please do let me know when the book is finished.

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Great so far

The story so far is pretty great, and I cannot wait to read the finished book.

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