Jaylah Williams-Author

Cool Idea

I actually enjoyed reading it and the concept of having letters was pretty cool. The only thing I would suggest is spacing out your paragraphs. It's a bit confusing when it's all cluttered, but it was a great read. Keep writing!!

Kai and Kat

The story is really freaking GOOD! While reading I actually felt like I was back in high school lol. The story has a realistic feel to it. I can’t wait to read more! Hopefully the duo find their way back to each other.

Poor Gareth

I think the story has plenty of potential to be great. Even after reading the first two chapters. I’m really sympathetic toward Gareth! The story makes you feel for him and his situation. And makes me wonder what everyone’s problem is (specifically his bullies) toward him. He’s just a kid minding his business.

Hopefully the background to the bullies is fleshed out. It seems they have some sort of sway with the law.

Besides that, there weren’t too many grammar issues except a run on sentence. But otherwise it’s pretty great!

I can’t wait to see what else happens! ✨

Unique

I've never read a story quite like this one. The plot was different than any other book I've read; a soul travels through different books to fulfill their character's purpose. From the first chapter, I was hooked and it had me wanting more! Can't wait for another chapter!