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Really enjoyable

The plot was full of twists, some expected, some less so. It was well structured, well thought out. I don't quite no what to say, it was a little slow for my taste, but I love action more than anything else. It's a good balance of mystery and conflict.

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Really enjoy it

I know you haven't gotten any reviews or comments, but that doesn't mean no one's reading. I'm really interested in the story, the omniscient third person is a smart way to get a glimpse of every character's integrity. I'm excited to know where this goes.

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I don't know where to start

I LOVED this book, and can't wait to read its sequel. It's full of plot twists, not a lot of cursing or gore. The style's unique, but there are a ton of grammer mistakes. I understand how hard writing is, so I don't judge. I stopped caring, honestly. The story itself was one my favorites on here.

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Beautifully Written

Nice horror/ thriller story, no grammar mistakes, as far as I can tell, unforeseeable plot twist, and definitely underrated. It's short and sweet.

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I loved it

The plot was intriguing. At first I only read it because I thought it was a romantic story, even though I prefer action. Your story is a wonderful combination of both, a double-edged blade. Well done. The development of Eve was beautiful; the effect she had on the King was even better. They complement each other so well, and you were quite descriptive.

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