Avery Lepp

Writer of fantasy and romance. I upload short stories and novellas and update regularly! Check out my twitter https://twitter.com/fae_avery

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Fascinating

Very cool concept and loved the plot! Characters were well thought out and it kept me reading! A few mistypes, grammatical errors that could easily be edited out. Some of the writing was a little clunky but didnt take away from the story. Overall was an imaginative, creative book!
Heading over to the second one now!

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Short Stories

A very good selection! Many leads onto potential books, each story felt very thought out. Was amazing! Well done.

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Triple Threat

I was surprised by this but in the best way possible. Good plot, I liked some of the depth that was felt with the characters. I really enjoyed it!

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Twice Loved

Firstly, nicely written. It's a very nice MMF story. The plot is simple and it's an easy read. A few unique aspects which was interesting.
The ending was a little odd. It was obviously leading to another book but it meant that it no longer tied everything up nicely. I just feel the epilogue was a tiny be too complex for an epilogue.
There could have been more of the whole story, more of their relationship but overall a very pleasing read.

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Interesting

An intriguing backstory, or even potentially a filler between two books. I enjoyed the way the different POVs were placed and the growth of the character in a very short read. You could see how Luca was going to turn out but I'd be excited for his story.
Some minor grammar issues, and of course could have been expanded upon and a lot longer.

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Aww

A highly effective short. You feel for the characters instantly and I found my heart pounding in anticipation not 100% sure where the story would go. Loved it!

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