Avidreader48

Short read

I wished it were longer. I enjoyed it

Not my usual troupe

I didn't think I would enjoy it since it's not my usual troupe but I did. 🔥

Great so far

I wish it was complete so I can binge read this story. My curiosity of who gets the female character in end is at an all time high

Emotional and graphic

Great read. I will read Slashers hopefully soon.

Lovable characters

Amazing, addictive read that will keep you flipping the pages

Great read.

It was kinda repetitive. Other than that it was pretty good. I would recommend and I will be reading more from this author

Great read

A couple laugh out loud moments. Enjoyable and addictive

Great read except. . . . .

I didn't like the ending which can ruin a book. I think it would have been better if the journey at the end was better. I think closure is important.

I don't like giving low ratings on Inkitt bc the stories are free

The chapters need a good cleaning. Every thing is bunched together making it hard to read. I do like the plot but couldn't move through the crowded chapters

Amazing and addictive page turner

I really enjoyed this sorry. The plot is very intriguing and mind-blowing addictive read.

Famous Sexy Rockstar feels

A light read with twists. I enjoyed

A fantastic enjoyable read

I enjoyed the writing, characters and the thriller feels. I was on the edge of my seat biting my nails reading as fast as I could. Kuddos to the author. Thank u for writing a great story.

All the feels of a thriller

I enjoyed the storyline and the suspense

Great book.

I enjoyed the characters and twists

Emotional storyline

I cried so hard. The character conversations are well written. The characters made me feel part of the story. My heart is heavy. I had to take a break. My heart' needed a break. Dear author, don't ever give up on writing you have the talent to create and put it in writing.

I hope the author tries writing a longer shorter story

The writing is good, and interesting. The length is my only complaint

You have the talent to write.

My first read from this author. I enjoyed the writing. I was wondering why the story is so short. The writer has what it takes to write a longer more in depth story. I hope to read more books that are developed from this author. If you like short stories I would recommend as the author writing flowed well and this little story moved smoothly from chapter to chapter

It's okay but written on the young side

I think young teenagers would enjoy this dtory

2 chapters in and I got hooked

It is hard to find food stories on Inkitt. This story is a hidden gem. I'm excited I found it.

Very long

Good read likable characters

A different kind of interesting

But a really good read as it is different in its own way. I hope the writer continues writing.

Frustrating

but still enjoyable nonetheless

Easy read

If you have brothers you know how over protective they can be. The writer did a great job with the story. It flowed well

Likable characters

Enjoyable plot

I'm glad I gave this story a chance

I wasn't sure I would enjoy this book but I did. I will read more from this writer

A long great read

I enjoyed the creativity of the writers imagination and enjoyed the pace the story flowed.

Great read with good writing

I did not expect to enjoy this book so much as it isn’t my usual genre

An enjoyable read

Great work

Love.this author's writing

I recommend reading. Her stories are all so great with plenty of angst

A brilliant read with a lot of back and forth between the characters that will drive you crazy and keep you reading

Drove me insane with the back and forth between the characters but I'm glad I kept reading and didn't give up.

💜💜

Enjoyed the story and characters. I recommend not writing the numbers and spell them as it can ruin it for the readers.

Ahhh. Can't wait to read more.

A slow build with the characters perfectly developing as the story progresses with struggles. A story like this gives all the real feels

An intriguing enemy to lover romance with all the feels you expect when reading this troupe. I enjoyed the author's writing as it pulled me into the story and made me feel apart of it. Kiddos to the author. Hopefully you finish soon.

Highly recommend

I couldn't enjoy this story.

I didn't like how the story was written. I feel the writing needs improvement. I did feel sorry for the character but it was hard to enjoy

An enjoyable 12 chapters. I hope the writer finishes the story

I enjoyed reading this story and wished for more. I think the author has potential

I like the writing and the story telling and the way the author put it onto pages. Some things were unexpected and didn't feel like it fit but it is a great read. Thank you

I would recommend to romance readers.

Compelling plot with addictive chapters that make you keep flipping thru the pages.

A must read horror story with each chapter sucking you in deeper. The plot is spectacular pulling you into the story. Kiddos to the author

Maybe for teenagers

The plot and characters need to develop to flow better. Some parts were confusing. I like to escape while reading and feel like I'm apart of a story. I couldn't escape in this book. The poor storytelling, and writing style made it hard to enjoy

Not the full story. Just a few chapters for Amazon purchase

There is nothing exciting. No plot. Nothing gripping to keep you flipping. Absolute smut and nothing more. I love erotic r reads. This one lacks a story and focuses solely on sex.