AwkwardBag

Just someone who wants to write stuff. Maybe even read, too.

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Great Introduction, Enchanting Characters

So far, I really like this premise! Having magical characters ingrained in the modern day is such a fun concept, and I like how it's detailed so far! David's haunting spirit, Willow, and especially Leofstan gives me high hopes for how this story will go! The SPCC definitely stays a close second in why this particular premise works. Not only is there a secret organization covering up magical creatures...but they keep them in a witness protection program. Not only that, our main character Andy is trying to stay under the radar. Not just from humanity, but others like her.
I can't wait to read more.

But don't feel pressured to churn this out, take your time!

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Two Distinct Mysteries

So far, I'm really digging the two differing mysteries. Having a serial killer AND a secret admirer be large parts of the plot really sell it for me. I can't wait to see where it leads!

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