Ashleigh Yates

Chicago

Southern belle in the big city. Lover of literature studying to be a doctor.

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Compelling!

I have read many variations of the arranged marriage story, but this book drew me in right from the first sentence. The characters are well rounded and interesting. They have layers and we get to know them as they get to know each other. The writing is just detailed enough to keep you reading but not so much that it feels flowery or boring. My only critique is that the miscommunication between Therese and Clause made me want to shout at them, maybe bang their heads together and make them talk to each other...but perhaps that is what the author intended. Well done.

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Real

Wow! I really wasn’t expecting the end. It was heartbreaking because the characters you created were so real that I felt attached to them. Overall it’s a great story but I feel it’s a bit drawn out, especially in the middle. I really enjoyed being able to see the story from both Ryan and Evelyn’s perspectives. Great work! I can’t wait to check out some of your other books.

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Hooked!

Awesome book! Can’t wait to hear what’s next!

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So relatable!

I loved June from the start! She's so relatable and I think that's rare to find these days. Your imagery is just great; Awesome story!

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