🦇BattyBerserker🦇

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Realistic

Getting a good story out when writing is already hard enough, but writing something as serious as this is even harder as it's more heartfelt and there are very realistic qualities that are part of the story that can be hard to put into words. I think you managed it perfectly, and while it is still a very serious topic, you also weaved in some lighter pieces in the ending to balance it out.

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Great Story

I will use my power of honesty and say that it is very good, but maybe make it a little longer and add some details. But other than that you are doing great! I am diffidently going to read more!

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Awesome

this is amazing! I enjoyed that it was a true story, you don't see many of those. and i would agree, DO NOT HITCHHIKE...unless its a nice old couple with a few to many cats and a fluffy dog. then it's ok. but over all great story!

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Very Descriptive!

I love the direction this story is taking!! I like how you seem to have your own writing style, it just seems to stick out to me. I also like your use of words and how descriptive you are. It helps the reader picture what is happening and what it all looks like which makes the story more enjoyable. Especially for those who read to escape from our reality and into the writing itself!

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