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This is an amazing idea that has been written beautifully. A little bit of elaboration as to why height is so important wouldn't go amiss, but at the same time I don't think it matters to the overall plot of this story. The characterisation of Anomoly was intriguing and it was so easy to get attached to her, despite the fact that it was so unlikely that she would make it. I think there was one error that I noticed (looking into the 'bright' as opposed to 'brightness'), but otherwise it was grammatically exceptional and the spelling was spot on. It's clear that a lot of thought and effort went into writing this and, in my personal opinion, it paid off. Congratulations on a beautiful story.

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