Beanz

I write for myself, but if others enjoy reading my stories, that's an added bonus :) (My stories are also on wattpad)

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Unique Plot & Characters = Great Story

This seems like a unique plot line, so I'm into it! I love the characters and the way the dialogue flows. It's fantastic, and I know a lot of writers sometimes struggle with dialogue, but you do a phenomenal job with it!

I didn’t see grammar issues so if there are any, they definitely didn't pull me out of the story. It's obvious that you spent time polishing the piece so good job there!

Also, I enjoyed the writing style because I feel like I'm being given the information I need to understand this story world and the characters that inhabit it (but sometimes it feels like a lot of information is getting thrown at the reader).

But overall, the story is really good and I would definitely recommend to my friends.

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