Bdeltoro4

Chicago

I love God, people, and writing stories that hopefully pull people in. Please check out my story/stories and enjoy.

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Inviting and relaxing.

Overall, this is a great story to grab and relax with after a hard day of work. Elsea comes off just as she's written: A teenage girl who has to be an adult for her child sister but the weight on her shoulders grows once she learns that she's from a mythical land. I enjoyed the sudden twist and the mild mystery in the beginning: I had thought this story would take a more psychological journey and that her crush would be some form of her imagination. However, the fantasy genre is more pleasurable and I am looking forward to more chapters. God bless.

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