Eli Phelps

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Could use a little editing

Could use a little more polish. The dialogues were not that natural. The heroine questions why he is divorcing her once then that's it the next thing you know she's signing he oapers without any fuss. That is really weird.

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The author will keep improving :)

I think this story is something that my fourteen year old self (twenty three now btw) would love and would read.

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