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❝ ꜱᴜᴄᴄᴇꜱꜱ ɪꜱ ᴛʜᴇ ᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ ᴛᴏ ɢᴏ ꜰʀᴏᴍ ᴏɴᴇ ꜰᴀɪʟᴜʀᴇ ᴛᴏ ᴀɴᴏᴛʜᴇʀ ᴡɪᴛʜ ɴᴏ ʟᴏꜱꜱ ᴏꜰ ᴇɴᴛʜᴜꜱɪᴀꜱᴍ. ❞ - ᴡɪɴꜱᴛᴏɴ ᴄʜᴜʀᴄʜɪʟʟ

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Gravity Falls

The sci-fi in this book was definitely deep within the roots but also extremely obvious. This story was definitely intriguing, however, I would specifically recommend this book for people who enjoy science.

It was an interesting read!

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The Iron Girl

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Some stories I read are based on a shy protagonist meeting this possessive idiot and then they fall in love. But this story the protagonist is fierce, strong and independent which I love about her. From what I've read so far the protagonist has made strong character development, the story itself has great humour.

For the critique, I've found a few grammatical and punctuational errors, I also suggest looking into different writing styles because knowing your writing style can definitely improve the way you write. If for certain parts you need to change the style it helps to know what your style is so you can work from there.

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Awakening

This story has excellent character descriptions and the internal dialogues help the readers perceive the characters. This book offers sharp imagery, relatable characters and quality writing. I am certainly intrigued in where the plot is going, your writing style is full of twists and turns.

For the critique, I believe the chapter length is a bit too long- but the humour and relatable characters keep the readers hooked.

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Vampires: Fang's Out

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There aren't many chapters to base this story off, however, the descriptions of the characters and their bonds are well pronounced in the story. The moment I read the first line I was hooked and couldn't stop reading, this story has so much potential!

There were a few grammatical and punctuational errors in the story, fortunately they weren't that noticeable, but I would still look over them. Your writing style is similar to mine, which makes it hard to find ways to help you improve.

I loved the story!

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Leave Behind The World You Know

This story is off to an excellent start. The descriptions are wonderful. I already see myself getting caught up in these characters.

Unfortunately, there are some minor punctuation and grammar mistakes but other than that I believe that this story has a promising plotline and complex characters.

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Blood Alliance

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The story's plotline is definitely hooking to the readers. I also found that the cliffhangers suspensful- which I guess is the entire point though.

I suggest adding more description to the characters and their surroundings, this gives the readers a glimpse to the surroundings and to what they should be seeing the characters as or/and their surroundings. You should also give a bit more insight into what the characters are feeling, it definitely ups the experience- from my experience as both a reader and a writer. Reviewing your work for any grammar or punctuational mistakes, it makes it easier to read.

Other than that, the plotline is clearly figured out, because it's hooked so many readers into reading this great piece. I found it very fun to read, maybe try elongate the process of what is occurring. Add mixed thoughts and feelings- if you're trying to make the road of the story full of twists and turns.

I loved it! Good job!

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The Downside To Perfection

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I love the descriptions given. I find that the place you chose to start the book is definitely interesting. The flashbacks -or at least what I think they are- I find the plotline to be twisting and turning with new discoveries and revealings.

Unfortunately- for me at least- the book didn't hook me into the writing the second I began reading. It was of course still interesting, what I would suggest is looking further into the writing styles available.

The story, otherwise, is quite descriptive, and the plotline is always twisting and turning which is a fun technique to hook the reader.

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Zoi

As a fictional writer poetry can be truly magnificent. I admire poetry writers because of all the subtle messages left in poems for the readers to find.

I usually find that most poem writers use fancy language far too often, this sometimes makes it harder to understand the poem and what subtle messages you left behind. However, I do suggest re-phrasing some of the verses. Fancy writing does not make up a poem.

One of my favourite pieces of yours is True Colour. My favourite line is "True colour, this was it, is inside my heart." I would love to see different styles of poems in your book, my favourite poem is "Nothing Gold Can Stay". I love everything about it, I suggest analysing it for new techniques on writing poems.

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Shadow King

The fact that Gabrialla can see death immediately hooks the readers to the book- this might be because not many authors write about this subject that often. It's refreshing and different from the stories that I normally read.

For the critique, the first chapter was a thrilling adventure, followed with great descriptions. Unfortunately, the next few chapters seemed to just drone on about her everyday life, this made me lose focus on the actual story and become impatient. Other than that your writing style is excellent!

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