*This review is written on an ongoing book*
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The story's plotline is definitely hooking to the readers. I also found that the cliffhangers suspensful- which I guess is the entire point though.
I suggest adding more description to the characters and their surroundings, this gives the readers a glimpse to the surroundings and to what they should be seeing the characters as or/and their surroundings. You should also give a bit more insight into what the characters are feeling, it definitely ups the experience- from my experience as both a reader and a writer. Reviewing your work for any grammar or punctuational mistakes, it makes it easier to read.
Other than that, the plotline is clearly figured out, because it's hooked so many readers into reading this great piece. I found it very fun to read, maybe try elongate the process of what is occurring. Add mixed thoughts and feelings- if you're trying to make the road of the story full of twists and turns.
I loved it! Good job!