Becca

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Definitely left me wanting more!

Really enjoyed this story so much literally couldn't put it down had to finish it in one sitting and was so disappointed when it ended can't wait to see more! Keep writing. Your stories are amazing

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Hard to follow......

The story itself was a great concept but the execution wasn't all that great, it sort of drug on and on and jumped making it hard to follow along with a lot of grammatical errors.... Keep trying though!

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Great story

Hoping for a follow up story. Very well written. Keeps you entertained and wanting to read more! Couldn't put it down

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Well written and kept me wanting more!

Absolutely loved this story from beginning to end! Really hoping for more to their story! Thoroughly enjoyed this

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I was shockingly impressed

I was hesitant to read this at first but I was extremely impressed with everything about this story. Very well written kept my attention the entire time, I couldn't put it down!

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Loved it

Honestly pretty well written,love the story line, characters and the attention to detail is quite riveting

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Absolutely amazing

This was by far the best I've read in a long time. My attention was captured from beginning to end

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Amazing

Amazing as always. This author was impressed me multiple times, I'd read anything they wrote with enthusiasm! Keep up the brilliant work! This story like it's predecessor was beautifully written, enough detail to make a clear image in your mind without drowning in too much! ❤️

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Absolutely the Best!

This is an excellent concept, storyline and everything!! Can't wait to read more by this author! The story captivatied my attention from the beginning and kept it throughout the entirety of the book!

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One word PERFECTION

Absolutely loved everything about this... Totally realistic vibe, without the wow non existent fantasy factor! Keep writing and I hope you get published

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5 stars all the way 🌟

This is the first time I've given all 5 stars... If you haven't read this book it's a must read can't wait for the 2nd one

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Not really my thing....

I didn't particularly care for this story.... I however got excited to read it when I read the intro and was quite let down by the story itself. Keep writing and perfecting your dream that's for sure. Work on grammar as well ✌

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Love your stories as always

Read this after finishing the. .5 story everything was just amazingly written! Can't wait for more

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Awesome story line

Could use some spell checking and grammar checks as well but the plot of the story is beyond amazing. Keep writing

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still reading only because I hate not finishing a book

OK so grammar is horrible in this book and mileage doesn't go from 10 miles to 3 to 4 miles just because their mode of transportation changes...... It would be a great story if you didn't have to weed through all the misspelled words and grammatical errors

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Amazing

Absolutely loved this. I truly hope there's much more to this story....... Keep writing!!

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