Bella_Lee_Taylor

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GOOD

your story plot was great. I wish that you will continue your story though, but you really need to check your spelling and grammar mistakes, because if you not the story won't be as good because no one else would understand really what your saying, but over all I loved your fan fiction.

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Good

the plot of the story is good and I can't wait to read the second book, but you need to check your grammar because as I was reading there were were important parts of the story some of the spelling and grammar were out of place and the way you you worded things can be better but I can see that this story is going to have an epic ending.

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Great

I love the plot of the story and I think you should continued with it. I love when you describe the other vampires the way that you did and I also think to watch your grammar because it can be tricky with the story that your doing in a romance novel.

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LOVE IT!!!!

I love this book, I would recommend it to anyone who a want to sit on the edge of there seats and fall in love of the charters. Feeling their love and the hatred of their enemies. I don't understand why people get offensive toward this book. When I try to look the reviews in over places of this book. Anyways love your book and hoping there will be more

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