bella

writer, podcaster, hot mess of a human

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intriguing beginning, can’t wait for more

based on reading up to chapter 4, I’m really enjoying the book so far! I’ve never read anything regarding Irish culture, so I’m definitely enthralled and can’t wait to read more as the book continues. your writing is fluid and comprehensible, and the pacing so far is perfect to keep the reader intrigued and curious, which is was the beginning of a book is all about! I seriously can’t wait to read more from this

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i like what I’ve read!

so far, I’m really enjoying what I’ve read, in terms of characterisation and where the plot is going. the only criticism I would pick out is the pacing, which seems particularly fast in the first dozen or so chapters. this could be a stylistic thing on my end (as I generally prefer more slow moving books) and if this is the style that works for you then that is fantastic! all I would say is keep an eye out for the plot moving too fast, as it can confuse and alienate readers.

other than that, your story is very appealing visually in terms of the cover and synopsis, and I really like what I have read so far!!

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a good foundation

the plot and idea is very interesting and I can definitely see the book’s potential, however there is clearly some need for editing as the writing style can come across slight clunky and not as fluid in some places: this is easily fixed in edits and second, third, fourth drafts! wishing you all the best

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