William Elias

Toms River

I want my readers to know the pains, sorrows, and bliss that have become my life as a Christian, Husband, Father of five, and retired Policeman.

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The Cleansing of Rowan County

This is an excellent story that sucks you in from the beginning. Throughout the narrative tension builds as Sarah and Elizabeth struggle with each other and a local Reverend who becomes a witch hunter. A little twist at the end makes you want more. The flow of the story is a bit choppy. The dialogue tags tend to make it more difficult to read. Transitions between POV and Narration, slows down the pace as well. Changing character thoughts to italics will help with discerning from dialogue.

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