Best story yet
I loved it, I love the words you chose to reel me in, I would love to see a continuation of this story in the future. The plot was great, I actually thought his mother was mad when she called! I love all of the twists and how you chose to relay all the details, you didn't drone on about them and used a great selection of words. I enjoyed every bit of it. I didn't want to stop reading as it always kept me on my toes. I love Isaac and Steven's relationship, pure and honest. Things did seem a bit rushed through the story and it was a bit difficult at times to know how much time had passed, other than the "10 months later" part. Overall it was a great story, getting to know that Steven was a good guy and that Isaac really loved him. I would love to read more of your content in the future.
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