BlueRose_712

โ€ขI'm tired of their stories, let's write our ownโ€ข I am obsessed with Greek mythology and Fantasy stories. Follow me on wattpad: BlueRose_712

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Lawfully RIGHT๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

I mean...come on...when you see Caitlyn has uploaded a new book, you're absolutely sure for:
1)Criminal Drama at its finest๐Ÿ‘ฎโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿš”
2)Best love story eeever, filled with so many twists that when they finally end up together you have almost lost all your soul waiting๐Ÿคฃโค
3)Strong.Female.Characters.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
4)Amazingly detailed and well thought criminal cases that leaves you with an open mouth๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ”ฅ
5) Unexpected plot twists that always have your adrenaline pumping๐Ÿคทโ€โ™€๏ธโœจ
Well, its clearly not surprising that this is another MUST READ that will leave you intrigued and waiting for more!! I HIGHLY RECOMMEND you read not only this book, but ALL OF HER WORKS!! She has put a lot of thought and hard work in each and every single one of her stories!!
Keep them coming sis!! We demand more!!๐Ÿ’ฃ๐Ÿ’ฃ๐Ÿ’ฃ

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The Moon's Pawn

You, dear author, have left me completely speechless!!!!! What other plot twists have you got up your sleeve?? What other dynamic characters are you going to create?? We do love a strong female hero and you have just created one for us!! Your descriptions are amazingly detailed and your plot surprisingly unexpected!! Well done, you successfully have created a total MUST READ for all the werewolf lovers, which I HIGHLY RECOMMEND!!!๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“

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Before After

This book doesn't have many chapters as of right now, but it has great plot and I can already tell it's going to be awesome, when it's finished. I love the conception of time in the story -it makes it different from the usual higschool love stories. The only thing that I would like the author to fix would be perhaps the cover, because thats what the readers first see and can attract someone to read the book. The book is great, so with a better cover I do believe that it would attract more people to read it <3 Hope you'll update soon girl!! Keep up the great work!!

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The Fighter

Honestly, this book had me hooked by the first chapter and I can't wait for the new updates!! I literally cried with the heroin's pain and felt her anger and desperation like it was my own!!! I mean, come on...you know it is a good read, when it gets you in your feelings!!! The description of the emotions is so damn perfect and it has almost none grammatical or vocabulary fails!!! This is a MUST READ that is more than worthy of your time!!!!
P.S. Send updates soon๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ”ฅโค

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A Star Risingโœจโœจโœจ

Although there are only two chapters up, this seems to be a promising read!! To be honest, the first chapter was a bit confusing (because there were too many names and information given), but after rereading it I understood everything clearly. The plot is interesting and I cannot wait to see how everything will unfold!! I'll be keeping my eyes on you author, waiting for your next updates!! Keep up the wonderful work!!๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™

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The Wish โœจ

Although there are not many chapters up yet, the first one got me hooked and waiting for more!! The plot is interesting and completely different from what I have read until now!! This is going to turn out to be a captivating story, I am so sure of it!! Keep up the good work author!! I'll be waiting for your updates!!๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™

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Amazing retelling of a classic!!!

Odile BlackSwan is a wonderful retelling of Swan Lake with a dark twist!! The story unfolds from the Black Swan's point of view, which is amazing because it follows neither Odette (main heroin) or Rothbart (main villain). We get to understand the misunderstood Odile, who portraits the "evil" Black Swan and see her struggling to find her place in this whole story. The plot is amazing as it follows the classic tale with minor changes, which leave no lope holes. The reader can't get enough and his focus remain on the story from beginning to end (I binged read it in one night). The whole book is so full of strong and raw emotions that the reader is so affected by them that he can begin to cry (at least I did)!!! The writing style is wonderful -everything flaws as they should. You keep up the good work author!! You're doing amazing in shocking us all!! I would happily read any other classic retelling you decide to write!!!
Honestly, this is definitely one of inkitt's hidden gems and I am so glad that I found it!! If it was published, I would have bought it yesterday!!

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The Goddess and The Wolf myth

An amazing plot that mixes the werewolf genre and greek mythology (and I am a sucker for it!!!)๐Ÿ‘Œ I like your idea to mix these genres together and the way you describe everything is truly beautiful!! I just feel that it is kinda rush in the beginning, that the plot is moving a bit to quickly...Not that I dont like where it is going, it just feels like everything is happening from one minute to the other...There are a few grammatical mistakes, but they are not too bad that they take away from enjoying the story!! I do believe that with a bit of editing this is gonna be a perfect story!!! Keep up the good work author!!๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™

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ฮ’lack Hollow

Captivating and detailed descriptions that allow the reader to picture everything in his mind clearly!! There are not many chapters up yet, but I can see a lot of potential -it will be definately a great read!! Great plot and characters!!! The only thing that perhaps you should look out is your vocabulary and grammar mistakes, but they can easily be fixed during editing!! Keep up the good work!!๐Ÿ˜‰โค

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Crown of Blades

An intreguing read, although there are not many chapters up!! The story line keeps the reader intrested and wanting to read more!! Your descriptions are awesome, although some paragraphs are a bit larger and therefore a bit tiring(it would be better to break them)! Keep up the good work and continue writing!!โคโคโค

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A BOMB STORY๐Ÿ’ฃ๐Ÿ’ฃ๐Ÿ’ฃ

I've already read this on wattpad, so I can write my review whenever I want๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
If you are into GREEK MYTHOLOGY, then this book is a MUST READ for you, which I HIGHLY RECOMMEND!! Strong characters, well thought plot and lit descriptions filled with amazing details!๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ
The author has done a lot of research about greek mythology and has her facts on point!! A book that will keep the readers intregued and waiting for more!! Keep up the good work sis!! You are doing amazing!!โคโคโค

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Stone Sacrifice

Strong.Female.Characters.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Intreguing plot, intresting characters, greatly detailed descriptions ( although grammar and vocabulary can be edited, but who cares with this story๐Ÿ˜) It keeps the reader's attention through the whole story, never boring him in the slighest!!
Great work!! Cant wait to read more!!

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Our Time Is Now!

Strong characters! Amazingly detailed descriptions that help the reader to easily imagine everything in his mind! Very well thought plot that doesnt bore the reader! This is a work that you've put a lot hard work in and it is easily seen!! Perhaps, it could be a bit polished, because there are a few grammar and vocabulary mistakes, but nothing to major!
Keep up the great work!!๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“

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Black Wolf

Werewolf+Criminal Drama=Bomb story๐Ÿ”ฅ
I love the plot and how Eli tries to find a way to control himself and Nina tries to find out the murderer. Your descriptions are amazing, especially in the prologue and chapter 1! The details of the descriptions make it easy for the readers to picture everything in their mind! There are a few grammatical and vocabulary mistakes, but who cares when the story is intreguing and so addictive!! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
Keep up the good work!! I am looking forward to your updates!!๐Ÿ’

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The Bodyguard

Intreguing and interesting with beautiful descriptions and amazingly detailed! Strong characters and well thought plot! There are a few grammar and vocabulary mistakes but they can be fixed during editing time! You have put a lot of work into it and this is something visible to the readers!! Keep up the good work!!

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Zoi

Captivating descriptions and heart felt emotions!! Your poems are deep and beautiful!! Cant wait to read more!!๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“

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Of All The Guys I Ever Loved

High school drama at its finest! I am very impressed by the fact that you can write such wonderful books at the age of 13!! Of course there are a few grammatical and vocabulary mistakes and to be true your chapters are way too short, but knowing your age I can tell that you have a writing talent that you can definately improve as the years pass by!! Keep writing and progress will come your way!! Well done girl!!๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“

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Artemis, the Dodekatheon saga

If you want to read a book about Greek mythology with a completely different plot twist, this is definately the book for you!! Strong characters, mystery, quests and a lot of drama that has your adrenaline pumping at all times!! I love the way that the Greek panteon clashes with catholism in a way that makes it seem absolutely normal!! I also love the way that the greek mythology/pantheon mixes with the roman mythology!! Its a very well thought work and it clearly seems that the author has put a lot of hard work onto it!! Keep going!!
P.S. Review for a book about Greek mythology by a Greek ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

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Embrace

Ms. author you have incredible writing skills!!! Your descriptions are amazing and detailed to the very last bit, especially in the erotic scenes!! I like the story in general and the plot, but I would suggest you spice things a little bit by adding a bit more drama and keep the reader surprised ;)) I like your supernatural twist though!! Makes things more intreguing!! Keep up the good work๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“

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Her Dying Fate

Loved it!! Captivating and intreguing!! Cant wait to read more!! Keep up the good work!!๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“

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The Assasins Guilt

Assasins, princesses, gems and young love...could this get any better? I am really loving it so far and I can see the potential of this story!! You have amazing writing skills, which everyone can see by your detailed descriptions!! Grammar and vocabulary mistakes can be fixed during editing!! Overall, its a veeeeeery good work and I cant wait to read even more!!

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Everlasting

In the beginning, I thought that this was another high school romance like all the others. I was delighed when I came to your supernatural twist! Great story, great characters and great idea! I do believe if you fix a few grammar and vocabulary mistakes and perhaps make your chapters a bit longer that its going to be perfect!! These are of course a few advices that will perfect your amazing story!! Knowing your age I have to say, giiiiiirl I am surprised!!! You got some writing skills!!! Keep going!!!

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Five Words

Do you know that feeling, when you finish reading a book and then you just sit doing absolutely nothing, because you dont know what to do with your life afterwards? Well, this book made me to actually cry and I am not someone who cries easily! What can I say? About the amazing characters? About the detailed descriptions? About the building love of Ace and Cher who makes you squeel every chapter and wait for more? I love the flashbacks and how we get to see what happens both in the present and in the past at the same time! I love the title of the book and the meaning behind it! I love the message of the book; that people cant always change or cant move on to the future no matter how hard they try. Congrats! This is a beautiful work of art, well thought and exellently written!!

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Secret Blood

So, there is only one chapter up, but this story is beautiful! It's well detailed and the descriptions are amazing! You can actually feel the emotions of the main character, which is also a bonus since it shows the writing skills of the author!! I cant wait to read more!! Keep up the good work!!โคโค

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The beast of the creek

A nice book for anyone who wants to read a short story! The descriptions are amazingly detailed and the adrenaline is pumping through out the story! Well done author!!

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The Gems of Blood

Very interesting introduction, I can already see that this story has a lot of developing potential! The descriptions are detailed and the battle scene amazingly explained! The main character is a strong female, which is also an extra bonus!! I cant wait to read more๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“

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Buttercups, Dasies and Lilies

This amazing short story describes something that we all have been through in our lives. However, the descriptions are so detailed and beautiful that they captivate the reader's attention and make him feel emotions he didnt expect. The description of the simple situation we've all found ourselves in once or twice, makes us see things from another point of view and understand the main hero more than we could ever imagine. Great work๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Secrets

Honestly...I have absolute no words for this masterpiece!! An original story for anyone who is into supernatural beings and especially is in love with witches!! A MUST READ, which I HIGHLY RECOMMEND for anyone looking for a surprising complicated plot with many surprising twists and dynamic main characters!! Intreguing and beyond interesting as it is, it makes the reader want to read even more and turning the pages quicky as the adreniline is pumping!!
You've put a lot of work into it and anyone can see it from each chapter!! Keep the great work up sis!!! Congrats!!

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The One They Left Behind

Well, as a person who adores a good clichรฉ, I can safely say I enjoyed your story. It's not very different from the other high school drama stories, but that doesn't mean that it doesn't have a good potential to evolve into a masterpiece. I just have some observations that will might help you get even better:
1) Your basic idea is very important and it would be perfect if you highlighted it more. You want to highlight the difficulties of Rose, who tries to overcome them and find herself and her happiness throught everything that is happening to her. Describing her inner feelings and deeper thoughts, and maybe some features that betray her embarrassment, her fear, her despair, etc., will give much more emphasis and will make the reader feel even closer to the main character. Give a clear message: that we are all going through difficult times in our lives, but we should always try for the best. Everything is done for a reason and the difficulties we face, prepare us for a better time in our lives.
2) By describing better what I mentioned above, your chapters will become much larger. Admittedly, they're smaller than they should be, and your readers might be a little bit...disappointed. Give them something more to read, even by explaining only the space and characteristics of the faces.
3) Some chapters may slightly confuse your readers, as there are references to the past that are confused with the present and very fast transition from one age to another. Of course, the rapid age progression and the references to the past are very interesting, but maybe you should use some means, to make it more prominent, as a bold font that warns readers of the time (5 years earlier-, -flashback-, -end of flashback-...).
4) Your characters are shaped beautifully,but you could give us a bit more information about their relationship. If we know more about their friendship, we will be able to relate more to the pain of Rose's split from them.
5) You have a few grammar and vocabulary mistakes, but they can be fixed easily with a good editing. I do believe that adding more descriptions of the places and the feelings and thoughts of the characters will make this story a bomb!!
Generally, is a great work that can become even greater if you fix a couple of things!! Your hard work is showing and I honestly want to find out how the whole plot is going to evolve, so as a dedicated reader I can do nothing more than help you improve and motivate you become even better...Keep up the great work!! You got this!!

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Motherhood at the end of the World

So, I dont usually read any future books -I am not really into them, but I do like this one. Here is an honest review:
1) I do like the fact that your main character is not someone we would expect to see. We usually see strong and powerful female or male characters that are perfect in everything they do and have absolutely no problems. Your hero is a middle aged mother, who is not powerful or special, but has an inner strength that comes from her desire to protect her children.
2) I do find interesting your point of view. Usually, people are trying to save the world or move to another planet because of Earth's destruction, but you chose to follow neither of these basic story lines. You chose to show the struggle of a mother in a destroyed world, where everything is dangerous and chaotic.
3) Your writting skills are on point, although you could edit a few vocabulary and grammary mistakes. I love your detailed descriptions, they actually allow me to picture everything in my mind.
4) I do believe that you should change your title, trying to make it a bit shorter and more interesting like for example "A mother's love" or "Limitless Borders" (for a mother's love). An interesting title makes a reader curious.
5) The curiosity part goes also to the cover. An interesting cover could make you gain a lot more readers. You can use www.canva.com to make awesome covers easy and quickly.
6) Generally, though, I believe that your story is for an older audience. I dont want you to take it as a bad thing, but motherhood isnt something that integues teen adults. I am telling you this as a 20 year old reader and I hope it doesnt offend you. This of course doesnt mean that it isnt a great book with a beautiful message ( that a mother would do anything for her children) , it just means that it isnt for a young audience that prefers a bit more action and adventure. And I know that the book does have action, but you know what I mean...
7) A last thing that I wanted to point out is that I found your chapters slightly long. This isnt always a bad thing, but sometimes it can get tiring for the reader...I would suggest that it is better to have more chapters and a bit smaller chapters rather than a few long chapters.
In general, it is a great book with an even more amazing message that I do believe a lot of readers will enjoy reading!!! Keep up the great work!!! You got this!!!

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Double Standards

This is the best crime drama book, I've read in a while!! What can I comment on first? The amazingly shaped characters that have such great personalities and well explained history backgrounds? The suspense and adreniline that is slowly but surely building, letting the readers waiting for more? The well thought and detailed crime cases, which are unexpectedly complicated and keep the reader in a constant agony? Or perhaps the complicated relationships of the main heroes and their tries to break off them and end up together? Its a perfect police drama, with action and romance, heartbreak and tragedy, but also suspense and unexpected plot twists. It intregues the reader instanlty, making him begging to read more. Honestly, I highly RECOMMEND it to everyone since it surely is a MUST READ!!. The writting style of this skilled author and the perfectly detailed descriptions take the whole book idea to a complete other level. Its a perfect choice for anyone that wants to read something well thought and original -different from the rest crime drama books. Congrats girl!! You've worked really hard on this amazing book and this is something that someone can really see, while reading it!! I honestly cannot wait to read the next chapters and find out more about Liam's and Callie's story!! Thank you for creating such a beautiful piece of art!!!

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Heart of the Dragon Queen

Let me tell you this... I love fantastic stories and especially anything about vampires, mermaids, werewolves and Dragons. However, I have read so many books both on Inkitt and on Wattpad that I was now almost certain that I would never again find an original book that would intrigue me and excite me. Yet, your book has managed to make me excstatic with its unexpected plot, its dynamic female characters and its awesomely detailed descriptions!!! It's a very promising novel, which I'm sure many readers will enjoy!! I was bewitched by the first six chapters!!! Congratulations on the wonderful work!!! Keep it up!!!
P.S. Please, update soon sisโฃ Dont keep us waiting for too long๐Ÿ˜ญ

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To Love Hate

This book is so intense!!! The descriptions are so detailed, the emotions are so raw and understandable, the characters so well formed, I honestly have no words!!! Its quite different from the usual werewolves stories, where the alpha and the girl find each other!!! I love the fact that Maeve has a life of her own, before someone takes her!! This is so well written and the story line is so unique that it is an absolutely MUST READ!!!
P.S. Please update soon!!! I need more๐Ÿ˜ญโค!!!

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Leo: Between the four sons

Satyrs, Fairies, Armies, Kings, Swords,Griffins...What else does a person need for a good story?? Nothing, I can assure you of that!!! The descriptions are so lovely that you can picture everything in your head too, so that's an extra bonus!!

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Ocean Song: Beneath the waves

Honestly, this is a quite interesting story!! I love how the author follows both Serena in the ocean and her brothers on land...it really helps express their emotions better!! The description of the merfolk city is simple amazing, exact even to the simplest detail!! Its something different from the usual mermaid stories and I am simply loving it!!
P.S. Keep going girl!! You are doing amazingโค

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The Queen's Injustice

Finally, a book with a female, who doesn't wait for a prince to save her!! Selene is a powerful and clever ruler, caring towards her people and loyal to her friends!! The plot is special and unique since it has nothing to do with the usual werewolves stories!! The writting is also exceptionally good and the descriptions detailed and awesome!!
P.S. You know that a book is good, when it makes you cry and laugh along with the main character!!
Great job, keep going!!!!

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Innocent Prisoners

I usually go for fantasy novels, but I couldn't help myself when I came across this book!! The clash of characters, the relationship growth and the whole prison experience is so well written that makes you immediately needing more!!!

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The Hybrid

I absolutely adore this book!! It's different from all the other werewolves stories, which makes it unique and special!! Aurora and Vulcan are relationships goals!! I couldn't get enough of it!! Every time I saw an update being up, I quickly clicked on it, too excited to wait any longer!!!โค

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The Myth of Despair

I love the fact that this book is so different!! It's a mix of dragons, werewolves, sins and gods put in together in a perfect harmony!! This is one of the most intriguing and unique books I have read in a while...

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Ironhand

I've read all the books in the Riders of Tyr series and I am awestruck!! Not only by the fact that the books are so damn good, but also by the way they connect to one another! Every character in the story is different from all others and Ironhand is a firm example of this! The description of their thoughts, their difficulties and their deepest fears and feelings is just amazing! Can't wait for more!!!

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Knock on Wood

This book is absolutely awesome! The writing style, the characters depth and the whole plot in general keeps the reader awake and excited for whats going to happen next! I was so excited that I finished the whole book in two days

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