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Off to a great start.

The story is off to a great start. I read the two chapters and I find it intriguing. It is too early to criticize or judge. But I do like Reggie's character, his friendship with Atilla. Your writing style is great too. Looking forward to reading the further chapters ☺

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Great read

The plot of the story is great. The character structure is also good but telling the readers everything about the characters at the beginning itself takes out the mystery from the story.
Your writing style is great but maybe a few grammatical errors here and there.

Polish up a bit and I think the story will turn out great.☺

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Great read!

The plot of the story is great. I have just read the first few chapters and I am honestly curious to know what happens further.

I am not usually one to read fantasy or super natural books, but I like the overall story structure. But maybe try and polish the story a bit. I was a bit upset that she was not so responsive when she found out that she killed Adam, who was supposedly her love. As far as I know, emotions are heightened when you are a vampire.

But overall it's a great read. Would definitely recommend it to my friends.

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Somewhere safe

I have read the first few chapter's and really liked it. I am not much into historical drama but I am gonna definitely read the whole story.
I really love the friendship and the cute banter Max and Sarah have between each other. They'll be a great support system for each other. The characters are built really well too.

Over all its a great read and I love your writing style.
Would definitely recommend it to my friends

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Partners in arson

I really like it, but would be more happy if there was something more to it. Like some other plot rather than just Elli. Yeah and maybe something more about her parents too.

As for Amelia, her character just didn't really intrigued me. She was just like any other introvert and kept her distance at all time.

The overall story was a great read. U would recommend it to my friends. 😊

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