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My review of your AMAZING book!

I think that you're story was soo good! It was amazing! I loved it so much. I was hanging onto every word. I did get a little sad when Colmen died but I did begin to accept the fact that not everything in a story can be happy. Anyways, I loved the ending with both Kael and Andra's baby girl and boy. Wow it feels so weird to type their names! I have to congratulate you on the great work! It was very descriptive and the plot was very well thought out. I like how the fact that Andra and Kael's relationship developed at a slow and steady realistic rate other than those other stories where the two protagonists fall in love at a ridiculously fast pace. Wow, I feel like none of this makes sense but I am just so excited and happy.
Well done! Seriously!

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