BookReviewer88

Zoro X2

I love this short story. This author just gets better and better. The main character's abilities with their blades reminds me of a certain character from a manga. I love it. And especially since it's so original. Keep up the good work!!!

Not good

I'm sorry but it's just not a good story in my opinion. I think the story is bland and when it comes to fantasy it doesn't do anything like a action fantasy would be.

Must read! Update!

This is so fun to read. Like I love that the character is full of all this emotion. I'm glad to see that in a story. And as for the power system,.. I sounds delicious.

Five plus new chapters! This author works quick and none of them fail to impress! This man is amazing. Happy Halloween Grant!

I love it!

This book is exhilarating beyond my first thoughts seeing it. The title of the story had me thinking what it was about or what could be the struggles. And when I first saw the couple chapters within it I was blown away. Keep up the good work. And you who see this review should check it out.

It was angry

The feeling from the character was felt as it came back from the past in the form of flashback to the present day of which he was struggling. Now the story is a bit rushed and sometime confusing .But over all the way the writer establishes the main character's rage and main goal is amazing compared to most novice authors.

It's a good story!

See I love stories like these. But it's an overused plot. Like okay I get it that the author was trying to do a few different things in the middle of it. Some of them work out and I hate to spoil it but most of them just didn't get to me as a professional reviewer. Like I've read hundreds of stories and some of them are just repeats of others. But this book it is a good one. But the twists and turns that the authors pulls you through are predictable. But that's okay. Because for what you can not see that is going to happen the books is spectacular.

Let's go!

That was an engaging story. Finished it all in one day it was so good!

Fantastic

Good, good. But those errors are the things that are pulling this story down. Continue working on it. I can't wait to read more.

Grand!!!

It's clever and amazing. I love the protagonist. I felt like I could bond with them and go along in their journey. Really played at my heart strings. Thank you for bringing this amazing story here.

Good

A story as clean as this can go long ways. Good job!

Amazing!

The story has been well written. I was expecting a bit more action and horror but still, it is good. Please keep working at it.

Keep doing good work

The book's idea is good but it's barely readable with the many errors that are within it. But I see potential.

6 STARS!!!

I'm telling you I have read a lot of stories in my days. But this one was outstanding by far. You took the detective role and made it, its own thing. I would one hundred percent rate this six stars if this app would allow me to. People should read this for sure!!! It's worth it 100%

You're amazing.

I'm telling you I have read a lot of stories in my days. But this one was outstanding by far.

Fantastical Story

I have not read a book that had so much lore and uniqueness like this one. It has it own pantheon and the story telling does a good mixture of sprinkling the lore in. Fantastic author in the works. I can't wait to read more of his stories!

Love at first sight

A actual love story in 2021! Good job!

Sorry.

I love that you tried to do something new to the genre but in my opinion it's just not my thing. Already in the first couple chapters I was snoozing and or confused. But a little tweak there and there in the story then I think you got something. And your spelling and grammar is amazing.

Cliche done right.

The plot is over done and cliche with grammar issues. But overall I like the main character and that he doesn't take no crap from anyone.

Good book!

This is really good! It was deep and realistic on how spreading awareness can be necessary, even through a made up short story.

So far so good!

So far that I read I like it. The overall direction that I feel the story going is entrancing. I want more of it the more I read it. But there are a few things that I can say is a little over the top. For instance the emotion and over all background is gone, and if not gone then barely there. But the wording and descriptions of the scenery is just to die for.

Given up

It looks like a four year old wrote this. There were loop holes and all sorts of mess ups when it came to writing. I couldn't even get past two chapters. And because of that I have to give this the lowest scoring ever. And I'm not one to just drag a story through the mud because of a couple spelling errors. It's just that it was hard to read and when it came to the fights it was like who is fighting what and with what. I'm sorry but I had to give up while reading it.