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FRIENDSHIP!!

This books characters really sets the mood of the story! I really appreciate your skills! You are a way good writer and hope you will keep growing with your talent!!❣ Friendhip is one of the most beloved part of our life..I really liked the idea of the story!!😊 And the book cover is really attractive!!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!❣❣

The poem which tells the secret of Life

Hmmm!! Well this poem is just lifting my spirits more higher!! And I guess I am on the top of the stairs of spirits right now!!Just amazing!! You rock my girl!! Keep up the good work😊

Smooth like flow of river

Through the very own experience, I can honestly say this was the most smoothly conducted awards here on inkitt!
No one can assume it was your first time hosting such an amzing writing contest!🙌
You really did great with this contest, I hope I can participate in many more contests organized by you in upcoming future!😊

Mysterious/scary adventure!

The story is great overall, I enjoyed reading it so far and would love to continue!
I would like to mention a few points:-

⭐It got a nice plot with an adventurous/mysterious storyline.
⭐The summary was interesting to read, the way you made the reader question was real good!
⭐ Character development was good but I had love to know more about the main character's personality and appearance. The character Dr Thorpe was well described in the 1st chapter, I could sense his presence.
⭐Work of art; The way used words was incredibly awesome. It made me feel to be the part of the seated crowd and then could feel myself in the shadows of Sam and his father.
⭐Few words were mixed up, it needs editing. This book will do amazing in future when it's polished.
⭐Well described details are something to not ignore here, Dr. Thrope seemed evil yet nervous while clicking on that button. Joao the giant seems kind yet has to follow the rules.

Scientifically beautifully written!

The story is one of the best stories, few fixes would make this story super hit!
⭐The cover is unique and the title is deep as well. The cover got a girl looking upward (as the title says breath) breathing in the air of the city shown on the cover.
⭐ I liked the plot, how you describe this story from a teen's point of view and the hint of what is status quo in the summary. And the reviving of computers made me feel so intrigued, sci-fi is one of the genres I enjoy reading.
⭐Everything was well described, I could feel myself as if I was present in their shadows and watching them continuing their work. There were many times I intended to talk to the character. Despite that I felt like there were some points needs to be focused on and more clearly described. It would be great if there were a few more scientific facts added to it. (As the genre suggests)
⭐ Character development; Now talking about that I owe you for your talent. Character's details and nature of that particular character are well described.
⭐I believe 1st chapter of the story should be hooking to read, It left many questions but I still think something is missing like you directly start the chapter while focussing on the scar, It should be something more intriguing.
⭐ There weren't any grammatical errors, you did a great job with punctuation and tenses.

Whispers of the heart full of love!♥️

This is one of the best short story collections, I have read. I can say that writer did follow the one central plot that is 'Love' though it is of a different type in each story. I would like to mention some points:-
⭐I loved the summary, the way you described what is love is beautiful.
⭐ I can't appreciate any more of the author's writing style. The way you write is full of emotions and it makes the reader feel the happenings.
⭐ I liked the first scenario mentioned in this book 'Ghost letters' even if the chapters are sort of letters but they speak a whole different story. I liked how you co-related letters, that feels like I am reading someone's exchange diary. (Speaking of Ghost letters) I liked how you didn't mention the whole incident aside from the letters but gave us some glimpse of incidents that have happened.
⭐ This book got many different stories each story tells different scenarios but all are plotted on the different types of love. I liked how you described various kinds of love in your short stories.
⭐ I honestly believe many stories from here can be turned into a new polished novella or novel.
⭐Whispers of the hearts, the Title of this book is perfect if we say it in a way or two. When we are in love we don't listen to our mind, there is that whisper deep down from our heart.
⭐ The book cover was as perfect as its name, It shows the writer writing her emotions/whispers he/she hears on that piece of paper.
⭐There were hardly any grammatical errod spotted.. I couldn't catch any errors. It was inflow and wasn't choppy to read.

Enchanted book!💫

The story is great overall, I loved the way you express everything. Being a lover of magical, suspicious and action genres, I drowned myself in it!♥️
I would like to mention a few points that I liked and noticed while reading:-
⭐ Summary was interesting to read, I liked the idea of the story. You got a vast imaginative mind.
⭐Starting paragraphs were hooking, They made me read more and drown myself in this story. I could feel myself there, in the way you described.
⭐The story's every incident is well written and well described with details that make the reader feel happening.
⭐I like how the story gradually unfolds itself and lets the reader enter a whole new page of the life of protectors and the people with powers.
⭐I liked the idea of making the main character an overthinker and with anxiety issues, many readers here can relate to it.
⭐ I liked how positivity came in the first chapter with the expression of nervousness!
⭐ The story is good overall but got some/minor grammatical errors. You can be 99.9% right but that 0.01% is still there.
You got this!!👍🏻
⭐ I loved the way you described everything. Everything around me seems so magical that I want to go and encounter those happening inside the headquarters.
⭐ At last but not the least title and the cover of the story is relating to the main character of the story which gives a few hints about the plot and makes the reader read.

Experienced incedence results to great work of words!👏

The story got a nice plot, It surely will turn out good once checked thoroughly and completely!♥️
Being not the smartest one here I would like to mention that.
⭐The way the summary of the story narrated itself like a movie teaser is admirable.
⭐"First impression is the last impression". Reading the summary, simply left the question in my soul, "what's going to happen next?"
The way it leaves the person with a clue and sparks the flame of knowing more is great.
⭐Plot looked not so intriguing at the starting but gradually when I read the 2nd chapter I started getting hooked.
⭐Characters were well described, and with just one read I got the hang of the characters.
⭐Story flows smoothly like a river. Character development is the major part of the story and the author did very well in that. I envy your talent for character development.
⭐The way you play with words, makes the reader not only read it with excitement but also feel it/feel the happenings around. Every incidence is described very well.
⭐I liked how the writer describes happening with 3rd person's POV and in detail.
⭐Words hits different when it is experienced work. The feeling of being a newbie in college/school is described in detail and is an accurate point to point.

Beuatifuly written masterpiece!♥️

The story is great overall, the plot is intriguing too. Being not the smartest one here 😅 I would like to mention:-
⭐Mentioning quotes at the starting of each chapter is a unique idea, it builds up the interest inside the reader. (Personally, I liked it)
⭐I felt like the story displays the true facts like it clearly explains the things which cannot be resisted and the fact of hiding our dark secrets/flaws or the pain of losing someone really close.
⭐I Loved how the story opens with the idea of a greenhouse and slowly enclosing the happening around. Starting paragraph of the story is magnificent/hooking.
⭐Plus the idea of opening it with a cat's POV is creative, I liked how the cat narrates. But at the same time, it makes me question that do cats are that mature to understand happenings around them?
⭐I liked how you use different languages but I doubt it is really hard for the English speakers as they have to go all the way down to check for the translation, maybe you can add the translated text in brackets or something. (According to my experience)
⭐It is quite tricky to understand the relation of characters in starting but the reader gradually becomes familiar with them.
⭐I liked how you leave some clues behind and let it be on the reader to find it in further chapters plus those quotes in starting also encloses many things!
⭐This story can make you cry, laugh, smile, shy at the same time. The true/successful writer is the one who plays with the reader's emotion and this story is one of the example of that!♥️
⭐The story needs to be checked thoroughly. Knowing that it is a work in progress, this is going to rock after all the checking!👍🏻

Aesthatic

It was amazing to read!!
I would like to say it is worth a read, read this and have some fun with cozy mood! :)❤

Mysterious Isabella!

This story made me feel like crying, laughing and bad at the same time!! Thsi was like a rollercoaster ride!!😆 I enjoyed sitting on the first seat!😆 It made me feel like I am the one of those characters in this story and everything is playing on it's own!!😮😮👏👏♥️
You made it very well sis!👏 You are a great writer and I will be waiting to read your stories in hard copy one day!😊 Do tell me when you are gonna publish it!😙 I will read it surely!😁
Keep it up sis!!👏

Intriguing plot

This was one of the best read here on inkitt!! Author has worked really hard and made this interesting plot!!😊
I really loved your writing style! You are a great author!!👏👏 I admire your writing style!♥️ I would love to read more from you!😊 You are one of the bestest author I have met here on Inkitt!! This story was great, I loved the idea! This was a rollercoaster ride with twists in every turn!! I loved it!♥️ rather than some grammer mistakes it was 5 star for me!!🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

I can doubtlessly say that this will be published in hard copies in future and you gonna rock!!😊

Deep

This was insane! Author have written it beautifully and with alot of depth in each line's each word! I just love how Author is putting her words down on this piece of work! KEEP IT UP!♥️👍

Just Great Applause to the author👏👏

Hello, I must say you are a great author with a great mind with great writing style!!💕💕
I love how smoothly your story explains everything and I just love it!!!😆😆😆
It is very difficult to find those stories which take us to their world and created images in our mind! And I can honestly say that this is that story!😀😊 You should give it a read! The author has done spectacular work and I really believe that in future this is gonna be published and millions of copies will be sold!!😊 would love to read more stories from this author!😀
And I can truly say grammar and punctuation were on the point! Not even a single mistake is there and you will surely admire reading it!😊💕

LOVE WHICH WAS NEVER MEANT TO BE!!

Hey...This was really a great story even though had read 2 chapters but I can feel the whole story running in my mind as movie!! Really loved your writing style and yes.. the book cover!!! Ooh the book cover is just what I can't explain...I am having shortage of words for your talent!!❣...I really loved your book cover!! KEEP GOING ON!!👍👍 YOU ARE WAY TOOOOOOO GOOOOODD WRITER!!👍❣💖

True questions

These poems are really sad but I enjoyed reading them!! Your poems reflect everything weather it is bitter truth or the arise of sweet little hopes!!❣❣
Loved it
Keep up the good work!!👍👍

Beautiful poem

I would like to say this is one one of the best poetry collection I have ever read!! It's amazing..just 1 word for this is WOW!!!! loved it yr you are great!!😊😊

Yes!! It was amazing

Hey dear, I want you to continue it please, I just loved it. it was mysterious ,adventurous moreover it was amazing,fabulous,lovely. I dont have words to explain it. Although it have some grammatical mistakes but it's okay!! It is just wow!!!!loved it......💕💕

Please continue this story......please please please.....I would like to request you for that ....🙏🏼🙏🏼