Beuatifuly written masterpiece!♥️
The story is great overall, the plot is intriguing too. Being not the smartest one here 😅 I would like to mention:-
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⭐Mentioning quotes at the starting of each chapter is a unique idea, it builds up the interest inside the reader. (Personally, I liked it)
⭐I felt like the story displays the true facts like it clearly explains the things which cannot be resisted and the fact of hiding our dark secrets/flaws or the pain of losing someone really close.
⭐I Loved how the story opens with the idea of a greenhouse and slowly enclosing the happening around. Starting paragraph of the story is magnificent/hooking.
⭐Plus the idea of opening it with a cat's POV is creative, I liked how the cat narrates. But at the same time, it makes me question that do cats are that mature to understand happenings around them?
⭐I liked how you use different languages but I doubt it is really hard for the English speakers as they have to go all the way down to check for the translation, maybe you can add the translated text in brackets or something. (According to my experience)
⭐It is quite tricky to understand the relation of characters in starting but the reader gradually becomes familiar with them.
⭐I liked how you leave some clues behind and let it be on the reader to find it in further chapters plus those quotes in starting also encloses many things!
⭐This story can make you cry, laugh, smile, shy at the same time. The true/successful writer is the one who plays with the reader's emotion and this story is one of the example of that!♥️
⭐The story needs to be checked thoroughly. Knowing that it is a work in progress, this is going to rock after all the checking!👍🏻