Soph💜

My name is Sophia and I’m a young author- my writing isn’t the best but I’d really appreciate some feedback💖💖

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Loving it

I really liked this book, at times both Aaron and Cameron seemed to be acting very possessive of lily and Courtney, well...
I have been obsessed with this story and I am glad that Lily ended up with Cameron.
Part of me thinks that there could’ve been a different ending where she found someone new but I don’t know how that would turn out.
I will admit that the story did go back and forth a lot, like lily was sleeping with Cameron, then didn’t like him cause of Courtney and went to Aaron, then didn’t like Aaron so went back to Cameron and kind of went in circles but overall I think it was good and I will definetely check out some of ur other books

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Cuteeee

Wow. Where do I start. I wasn’t expecting that by I am honestly so happy for the girls, they are so cute together. Ur writing style is so good and I will definitely enjoy checking out ur other stuff. Xx

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Wow- I have no words

Wow, where do oven begin- this was a beautifully written story and I can say with all honesty that I want my writing to be like this. The author captured emotions so well and I won’t lie I wasn’t expecting it to end like that. If I had the chance to change anything I don’t think I would- I think there could also be a version where Ava goes with Kieran instead but I’m not sure how it would work. Love your writing, I will now proceed to follow your account Xx

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Luna moon

This book was great. I loved the storyline, I loved the characters and it made my heart beat faster. It put a smile on my face. There were a few small plot twists, the whole JD thing kinda confused me not gonna lie but I thought it was a great, sweet story. Also there were a few missing words and grammatical mistakes but that happens sometimes so I’m fine with that.

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