Not a fan
Though the plot of the story is amazing, I'm not sure how this book has so many likes. The novel is written like a list with no attention to detail in the characters surroundings. And though the main character is written well, the rest of the characters seem to be written without any real emotion.
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I apologize to the author for such a review, but this novel needs some serious editing and a lot of hard work. The potential for a great book is there between the lines, but more effort needs to go in to blending it all together. I could honestly only get though so much of this novel before getting irritated and skipping ahead to see if the writing got any better.
Advice to the author: reread each chapter carefully. If you read it aloud, I find it helps find flaws in your own novel. The grammar mistakes I expect (even my own has several and I've recited it multiple times trying to get it all right, so I would never expect perfection in anothers) but the general FEEL of it needs to be fixed greatly. For more detailed tops, read the comments other have written in the chapters as many of them said exactly what I was thinking.
Hope it gets better, just remember not to give up. Persistence is the key. And reread, reread, reread!