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I run around Inkitt quite a bit when I should be doing schoolwork, and it gives me quite the opportunity to scroll through a number of stories. Keep that in mind as I say the following, please.

. . . This is quite literally one of the best things I've read online in a VERY long while. Not only do you have a marvelous plot, interesting characters, and a remarkably good writing style, but your grammar is absolutely spot on---I have a tendency to be picky when I read through anything, and I bear no lies or half-truths when I say I didn't spot any in this. I can't even remember if I even saw a comma out of place.

The characters are awing. I like how we get both perspectives without a clear of blatant change of view, necessarily. I love how there is legitimate character development, and I would like the applaud the artwork; I didn't even notice who or what the scene was until I was almost finished with what is written of the book.

I can't tell if I'm giving you a legitimate review or just ranting, so I'll end that there. I hope you continue this, in some way. Your writing is beautiful, and I'd love to see and learn more of what happens to Chuva and Silas.

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