Bren S.

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Overall your story is great; the plot, moral, the emotional aspects the characters brought forth, etcetera. I loved how the story was written, telling the story behind your characters. Although, at certain points in the chapters, I was confused trying to follow what I was reading. Multiple times I had to go back and re-read to understand what was happening and being told. In the end though, when the anonymity part of their relationship was discovered; I was entranced due to what was being told about your female protagonists. Her story was unique and fit perfectly for what was happening in the final chapters. So, through it all, I loved your book and was a breath of fresh air compared to other books here on this platform.

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