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Beautiful imagery

I love the cliff hanger on the first chapter, and the authors imagery and description work paint a vivid picture that breathe life into her world. It’s only in the beginning stages, so there can’t be much said for the plot, but I look forward to finding out what happens next. :)

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Enjoyable read

I found the plot enjoyable and refreshing as a whole. Definitely something that I've never experienced as a reader before, and I appreciate that. There were some grammar and technical issues, but that's to be expected and is not really a deterrent for the average reader. I am looking forward to seeing what direction the book goes, and give props to the writer for taking her idea and making it a reality. Good work, and keep at it! :)

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