BrooketheWitch

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Hi.You could work on your punctuation, but i adore your writing. I'm sorry if this is short, but there really isn't much to work on; you've got fantastic ideas, a great writing style and bold commentary. It's fucking great; I rarely come across writers with well written themes. Keep writing!

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Really great writing style. Just a tip: Use your tab and enter key more than you do; it'll help keep your story going, and lowers your chances of boring the reader.

Keep writing, though.

Would love it if you could look over some of my chapters. Its great to have the perspective of another writer, and I'm relatively new here. Here's the Link: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/action/351232

-Brooke

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Her Name was Katherine

Hi! I'm Brooke, and I saw your post advertising this story. Here's the feedback:

-> Love your plot, and your ideas are fantastic. I think this could make a really great thriller, if you play your cards right and keep improving your craft, which leads me to my next point.

-> Work on your punctuation (Commas. More commas.). Try reading your work aloud - it might help you know where to place them.

-> To be a good author, you have to have a black belt in emotion. There's a lot of action (fun to read, mind you), but I don't sense any feeling behind the words. Work on that.

I'd really love to help you out. Anything I can do?

And: Would it be alright if you read some of my work? I'm new here, and trying to grow as an author. If you could write a review (and Like it, if my work's any good), I'd be very grateful.

The Link: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/action/351232

Thank you!

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