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Bodyguard Romance

The beginning of the novel intrigued me and I am looking forward to seeing how the romantic relationship builds going forward. Although there are many grammatical mistakes, they don’t pull away from the main story. This story is well thought out and I would recommend it to anyone interested in a bodyguard romance.

A Great Read

The story was extremely well done with action and romance; however, there were multiple grammatical errors and a missing section of the storyline. The author still did a really good job giving a romantic story unlike any other I have ever read. A definite recommend to all readers who love the wolf genre.

Interesting but Needs Works

The main story line is interesting in concept, but it’s missing detail and clarity. The wording is choppy is certain paragraphs then great in the next. The grammar flaws drew away from the main story too much for me. Also the story is labeled erotica, but from what I’ve read so far, it’s not. This feels more drama than anything else. Finally I had issues with the characters. Diane and her niece have an interesting back story (although it’s a bit rushed and glossed over), but the people you’ve surrounded them with, especially the main male role, is very one dimensional. The story just needs more.

Hot and Romantic

This story is amazing! God I’m in love with Sebastian and I wish for more of him. The writing is nearly perfect, it felt like I was reading an already published novel. There were a few cliches, but the story was great and I would definitely recommend this author to everyone.

Better than Published Novels

This is one of the greatest stories I’ve read on Inkitt. The author has put so much work into building the characters and the chemistry between the two main roles. This book is better than some of the published novels I have read. I can’t wait to read a completed version and I hope the author updates soon.

Girl In Pain

The author paints a beautiful picture through the eyes of the main character. Although there are some grammatical errors, they draw draw attention away from the feelings you get when reading. The connection between the two characters is a bit forced in the instant love connection in the beginning of the story, but as I read further I can see how similar their pain truly is. The story is very well written and I can’t wait to read the finished product.

The Lost Heir

By the first chapter, I was completely hooked. The author paints the picture of the town in thrilling detail and gives a mystery worth waiting to see unfold. The storyline is thrilling and captured my interest immediately. I can't wait to read the finished story

A Dark Romance to Enjoy

This dark romance is a new take on the MC genre with compelling characters and love. Although there were many grammar mistakes, the overall plot drew me in and I couldn’t put the story down. The only huge critique to be made was the trouble with connecting to the main male character. He seemed a bit too harsh and broken but the author portrays his pain well. I look forward to reading more stories from this writer.

Worth The Wait

This novel may not be finished yet, but it’s definitely worth the wait. The story is so intriguing and different from others in this genre and I can’t wait to see how the story unfolds.

Truly Love and Lust

I didn’t think a couple could be so different yet fit perfectly together. This novel is amazing. The love feels real as you watch it grow from a lust towards the characters to turning into a true love. This is a definite recommend.

An Alternate Better Than The Original

This story is an amazing retelling of a true love. Having read both this story and the alternate universe, I can honestly say that there is no two people better for each other than Poppy and Knox. They are the perfect soul mates. This retelling of their story made me fall in love with them all over again. I would recommend this book to everyone.

Couldn’t Put It Down

I’ve spent the last 4 hours reading this book, and all I can really say is wow. It’s compelling storyline kept me hooked from beginning to end. I can’t wait to read it all over again.

Needs An Ending

This story was amazing. It has love and drama and intrigue, but what it doesn’t have is an ending. After waiting forever and going through multiple sites, I have read 54 great chapters only to be left on a cliff hanger where in order to continue reading, I would need to go to a third site, a site which is the opposite of user friendly. Although I love this story and I want to recommend it to anyone who is interested in historical time pieces, I wish the author would just decide to publish it already like promised. It’s a great read, but one that will leave you unsatisfied until an ending is finally given.

A Worthwhile Read

This is one of the few books I can honestly say I waited for updates. I loved the characters and the love between them; however, I felt the ending was a bit rushed and forced. That being said, the story was still a worth while read and I look forward to reading even more from this author.

A Mafia Love

A true love story. This author has a way of making the reader feel the love between the characters in a new way. This story had love, drama, and action with a compelling plot that will keep you hooked. Overlooking the occasional grammar mistake, this novel is nearly perfect with a love story that different than most others.

A Wolf Story Unlike Others

This wolf story is unlike any other novels I have read. It’s compelling and the author has a way of painting a beautiful picture between two mates that were separated and found each other again. I hope to read more from this author soon.

A Story of True Love

This story is a great love story about overcoming obstacles and struggles between destined souls. Although the ending of the story was a bit rushed, the author doesn’t leave you disappointed. Definitely a recommended read.

A True Love Story

Romance is real. This author captures the growing love between two people in such an inspiring way, that you feel as if you are truly seeing it. I’ve never read such a beautiful love story.

A Perfect Love Story

I honestly could not put the book down. The characters have great chemistry while the story telling was beautifully written. I would recommend this novel to everyone. It truly is a perfect love story.

An Amazing Read

This book was great. It kept me engaged and on the edge of my seat for every new chapter. I can’t wait to read more from this author.