Mesabri

Fayetteville

I am 27 year old, mother of 2. I have always had a passion for writing when I was younger but it deminished as I grew up. Finally the passion is back and I'm trying it out for real.

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I tried to finish it but only made it about halfway thru

I tried so hard to make it thru this book. It has a great plot but the transition between real life, dreams, memories, and visions is so confusing. I couldn't tell what was what. It made it harder when the pronouns randomly changed from his, him, he, in one part.
It really did seem like a great book and I don't even mind spelling errors bc I know it's annoying to go thru and edit but the overall flow of the book was a little all over the place skipping from and office convo immediately into something happening another day.
You have great skills but I would highly recommend working on the overall flow of things.

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Great book but had me in absolute tears!!!!!

This book was so captivating and had ne on edge. But damn the ending had me bawling my eyes out! Cant wait to read the next one!

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Whirlwind of emotions

Ughhhh. This book had me happy and mad. Giggling and crying. As much as I hate what happen the ending was amazing. It was a great twist to an amazing and unconventional plot. Great book!!!

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Amazing and captivating

Loved this book. It had me giggling and sad and giggling again. It was such a good story! It was just steamy enough without getting smutty. I so wish there was a second book. ID love to read more into their story and maybe their friend finding his mate. Bravo

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Well damn!

There was 2 chapters that confused me around christmas time but other then that... It was one hell of a story. I CANNOT wait to start the next book. This was a page turner. Dont read unless youre prepared to read it all in one go bc you wont be able to out it down!!!!

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Wonderful

Few typos but other then that it was a great book. I SOOOO wish there was a little more steam in the books but still great plot.

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Hot steamy realistic!

I couldn't put it down. It was one of the more realistic eroticas I have read. It was written great and the story line was captivating. I cannot wait for the next book!

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Kept me on edge

Other then a few typos this was very well written. It had me on edge and I couldnt put the book down. Everytime I thought I knew what was going to happen I was so wrong! Must read

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Very well written

Other then maybe a handful of typos this story was so well written. Beautiful story that kept you on the edge the whole time! Good clean action packed romance.

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Amazing

This really was an amazing book. The author did great at balancing action, romance, and the spicy stuff. I really hope there is another book!

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Hooked. Mezmarized. Ready for more!

OMG I want the next book so bad! That is a mean way to end the book!
Truelly an awesome book tho. I would have enjoyed a little detail in the "dirty" scenes. But wonderful everything

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Wth!!

This book by far had the biggest and most unseen twists. I cried a bit. But it was an amazing plot. The end made me angry and soooo ready to read the next book! Tho this book had the least sex scenes the plot gave it more depth! Amazing book. Amazing writer

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Captivating

So far this is by far the best plotted book. It has twist that you would never guess. And yet it ties to all the others. It's amazing and suspenseful!
Con: there are quite a few spelling and grammar errors

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Captivating

The story is so compelling. Tho the character details can be a little overly detailed. This is amazing. Even the sex scenes are tastefully. They pull you in work you up but still stay solid.

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Wow

Captivating

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Omg

Okay I can't put my phone down this story is too amazing. I have seen a few spelling errors but I don't even care. I'm hooked and probably not going to sleep till I finish this!!!

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