Cadence Abbot

Fake Love Review

A really good read, characters are well written and with some very interesting dialogues. I love the descriptions and the way the Author handles the first love situation.

The story is still underway as of this review, and it is promising to be an enjoyable and engaging read throughout!

Strange Aftermath A Review

Brilliant story written with a very realistic, somber air that places the reader in the midst of an apoplectic world. Told with a great deal of feeling and intriguing twists this story never had a dull moment!

I would highly recommend reading this story, and others by this author!
Cade

A rather interesting story

Actually a really good story with a brilliant plot..
The turned phrases are witty and make one think. “ cleaning their bloody messes” for instance
Liked the style of writing and the ending did not disappoint.

Movie Night Review

A short story with a lot of tingles. This could be very easily made into a longer story or a movie. Some great scary vibes. Would highly recommend giving this one a read.

Love was not the reason

An early review for a story that has a lot going for it, including a great title and cover.
The set up is very interesting, especially seen from each of the charming main characters point of view.
This is a brilliant bit of storytelling that will only get better.

Man of God Review

A very well orchestrated read into the lives of religious men faced with uncertainty in both their everyday lives and those of their calling.
A quite thought provoking story, a journey that is well worth the time to take.
Excellent

Night time Horror Review

Only one chapter written to what promises to be a strong story with an intriguing plot.
Once the structure and grammatical issues have been corrected and a bit more written, this will be a good start for a newer author.

I have read the previous reviews and they have all touched base on how to make this story better , and they are correct.
Good luck writing and keep it going you have a good feel for this story!

Lityle fires review

I have not read many stories in this genre, but this one is a truly fun read.
Witty dialogue and some amazing characters keep the reader hooked on this Authors Brilliant writing skills.

Glass Review

Very imaginative and witty take on an old story.

Cinderella is no pushover, what she wants, she goes for!
A well written and interesting read!

Two Way Mirror Review

Ingenious plot and a really Brilliant ride all together. I read with extremely focused interest, missed the clue staring me in the face, and was totally taken aback by the extremely well written ending!

A Rose Collection Review

This was a inspired collection of some of the sweetest written Romantic tales I’ve ever come across!
Very original and very scintillating in a most soulful way.
Down to earth couples making love in a very imaginative series of situations!
if this is a taste of what’s to come, I’m all in....

Two of a kind review

I found this to be very enticing and enjoyable read, really well written.
The words flow nicely. The characters are well conceived and charming.,,,

poetry that speaks from the heart

A wonderful collection of heart felt words, both inspiring and melancholy....
Poetry can be powerful if told with the right inside voice , and this Author has created something amazing with their words.

Valentine , Temptress

Another entry finished in the ongoing saga of our heroines love story.

A brilliant read full of romance, emotions that pull and tug at the heartstrings.

This Author has a splendid way with words, drawing the reader into her stories with such a subtle touch that one dose not realize how deeply the hook had been set!

Flawless Plot

A very engaging story , still in the works, told by a talented writer.

the plot is intense, the characters are cunning and creative,the writing clear and with a sense of mystery and foreboding..
I am thoroughly enjoying this read!

A brilliant storyline

Really enjoyed reading this story so far.. A really intriguing plot, compelling characters with a lot of interesting dialogue and some rather engaging plots.

A really great read from a talented Author!

A great start

This author has began writing a really smart story. The characters are interesting and original. I especially like the way her characters alter egos banter back and forth , a bit like twins will do!

This Excellent tale will get better as the story continues!

A powerful story of romance

This story is an incredible journey into the life of a very down to earth Heroine ! I thoroughly enjoyed living her life through this story , and was left with an intense desire to read more.
Fortunately there is a sequel,
I highly recommend this, or any other story written by this incredible author.

Saw her in the Mirror

The best thing about being a writer is that once one tells a story it is theirs, and once they are done with it and happy with it then that can be that!
This story had a nice style, very imaginative plot and though not a lot of back and forth dialogue, some great characters....
As in most stories, there is always room for improvement, more character development, descriptions,tweak her and there... And not that I am saying this is the case here, for i did find it a good read down a path of horror,
but I know that 5 years ago I wrote a story I was completely happy with, until I reread it a month ago and suddenly reading it fresh like that, found a new angle and began a rewrite.

As a writer, I would be very proud and happy with this effort, and encourage anyone interested in a good horror genre read to give it a go!

in the Mind Review

Great story concept, the author is working on making it better , which gives it a potential to be a Brilliant story with a lot of great twists and intriguing characters.
I enjoyed reading through this and will continue to follow it as this storyline developed and improves.
I have left suggestions in he comments on various ways to make this story more interesting, so will not repeat them here.
Good luck , you have a gift, keep writing!

A rather captivating story

Actually well thought out plot, amazing characters with some rather fun dialogue.

A few grammar errors, but written in a second language explains that. I really enjoyed this!

A Brilliant Romantic Romp

Very little wrong with this, actually nothing wrong from my point of view! A Brilliant story told from various point of views from the main characters. Witty dialogue and observations really makes this an engaging read. The story was not finished yet at the time of the review , which means more ,and possibly, the best I’d yet to come !

Very imaginative Sci Fi read

Very interesting story with a lot of imaginative ideas. Just needs a little bit of work with grammar and editing, nothing overwhelming
This tale has some wonderful characters and potential, was not quite finished when I wrote this review , but I do intend to keep reading it.

Definitely A queer dream..

This is written much like a dream would happen. Broken sentences, no clear scenarios, the story goes in and out like someone is in a dream. Like the end where you are in a leash and have to stay until your allowed.

An Epic Tale

This is an amazing story, with well researched details woven into a tale with endearing characters and amazing scenes.

If you want to experience a really good fantasy story, look no further!

A very ingratiating Read

An amazing bit of writing, the way you have captured the innocence of youth, and the feelings we all have experienced ourselves! Feelings that sometimes can be a mystery to ourselves. A highly rewarding read...

A great ride into the twilight zone of reality

A very Captivating read, full of interesting characters, situations and engaging characters.. there is a fine line between reason and reality, and this story is crossing both, repeatedly.

A rather fun read, witty dialogue and great characters ...

this is a great story, very engaging, with unusual characters that one can really feel close to. Well plotted and created! I would recommend this to anyone curious to try a story in a class all its own

Brilliant trip of a Story

A great read , an excellent one if your a fan of the movie Saw. Well written with character descriptions and situations that one can really connect with , sometimes rather sadly. I really like the author’s style and imagination.

A very deep rooted horror story

Excellent read, brilliant ride into a deep rabbit hole of emotions and shadows. One sees what the writer sees, any errors of writing are merely a veil that mask his the characters emotions...

Interesting read

If one is into unexplored love, then I would recommend this story.., written by a proven author who is quite adept at capturing her characters emotions and desires

Engaging story ripe with romantic interludes and intriguing plots

Brilliant read. Well written and detailed descriptions that leave little to the imagination, but adds a lot to enjoyable reading experience!

Brilliant format for a mystery.

A perfect little small village mystery , a plot deeply rooted and intertwined with any Agatha Christie story, and a dash of ‘arsenic and old lace ‘ for good measure.
Brilliant format using letters.

The only thing missing was a body under the rose bush
I gave an all thumbs up review, for yes, it is that good a storytelling

An intriguing plot

An interesting plot
The paragraphs are out of sync which makes it a tough plog to read through
Make sure you only have 1 single space between paragraphs
The story itself could use filling out, try adding a bit more descriptions, what you and your character is seeing around them, in rooms and more if their feelings
It’s not easy at first , but the more you do the easier and more fun writing stories becomes
Hope this helps. You have have the talent:)

Naughty telling of a fairy tale ending

A good idea , could use a little work with the wording and use of capitalization. The story is rather cute and charming in its own right.

Brilliant read

A little bittersweet, but a very beautiful story. Plot was interesting, well written as were the characters. Read it in one sitting.

A portal review

This is a really brilliant spooky bit of storytelling
Spirits standing in line, a shadow person crouched in a closet , pool balls clacking in an empty room...
The author has written down some very eerie and unsettling real life occurrences
A highly recommended read

Asylum Review

A riveting ghostly tale teaming with great characters and spine tingling bump in the night situations. A great bit of storytelling from a rather talented author.

Mind night review

A great story comes from an Author with a brilliant imagination.

LB is just such a writer.
This latest series is not only an adventure into eroticism, but an adventure into the workd of Vampire(Bampire) that is truly amazing and well extremely well written.
I enjoyed every tantalizing minute savoring this read.

Review of A Haunted Chapel

A very Captivating, intensely driven, read, full of interesting characters, situations and engaging characters.. there is a fine line between reason and reality, and this story is crossing both, repeatedly.

A Steamy Review

A brilliant series of Erotic Tales that anyone will find a subject to fit their fantasy or desires
Well written and a very engaging read where desires are brought out in some really interesting descriptions and clever dialogue! A majority of this would make over the top erotic stories.

An alphas vixen review

A very charming and clever bit of storytelling. Enchanting characters and a great, exciting plot await the lucky readers of this story. Brilliant writing.

Grace - A Review

First off, the cover really grabs ones attention and is a smashing lead in to a really poignant story. One may not feel comfortable with how it begins, but then not all stories start out feeling comfortable, but for those who truly read it through they will find a gem.

Find me review

Brilliant characters and dialogue make this story an smashing good read.

The Questing Knave Review

Brilliant Tale. It held my interest from the 1st paragraph, so much so I read it in one sitting. Strong character study of a working jewel thief/Cat Burglar. For him the thrill is in the hunt. Cannot wait to read more of his captivating adventures

Erotic Saga Review

For a first effort this enticing story is a brilliant read.

I liked a lot of the descriptions, they put me in the heat of the characters moments and I could feel what they were feeling by the authors words.

Could use a little more rewrite and editing, but nothing that really sticks out, and it will make an already exciting read that much more enjoyable!

Keep at it, you have talent.

F M Review

First off I really appreciate this gift you have given me. By taking my poem and creating a story told in your own charming and witty style...

Shamelessly I am putting up the shortcut to it...

A Highwayman's Lament
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/adventure/490210

This is an excellent story, told with humour, jest and just the right amount of tantalizing randy fore play. A thoroughly enjoyable read it totally captures the essence of a good fairy tale run amuck.

A touching story near and dear to my own heart. Thank you again for taking on the task my friend…

Sherpskin Review

A very compelling read. The characters are interesting and their dialogue is interesting and down to earth.

A very well written story.

Valentina Beyond

This story is beyond amazing.

A great addition to an already unforgettable saga of a magical Heroine and her endearing tales of love lost and gained.

I would highly recommend giving this a read from the start of the series. Please leave The comments that you will feel compelled to do after each heart tugging chapter.
Enjoy.

Tied me up totally - A Review

If this is the first story one reads from this author, then you are in for an incredible experience.

Witty dialogue, engaging characters and some rather heated moments are are the norm for any of her works, and this brilliant take on the Rapunzel fairy tale is no exception.

I was really taken by the clever use our heroine Madrid her long locks to ensnare her “knight” rescuer, this princess, a bit out of touch after being locked up for so long,proves to be not as much a damsel in distress as one first imagined.

In a great plot m twist, her knight turns out to be something quite out of her ordinary vision of what the princess had been expecting.

All in all this story had me in its wonderfully written grasp the whole time.

A review for The Arrangement

I want to be one of the ones their in a fancy dress and stunning jewels, sipping a cocktail as I admire the ice sculptures, waiting to be targeted and tapped on the shoulder and then to use my golden egg, and I know just the fantasy I would ask for.

This book has really peaked my fantasies. It is very well written with a plot that is original as it is believably realistic.

The characters are incredibly lifelike and the dialogue witty and engaging. This is a story that contains sexual encounters and they are handled and told with a very believable jibe.

The best part is that there is still more to be written and I am looking forward to reading further, this and other stories by this Brilliant and Talented Author !

Valentina Bonded Reviwe

This is a most intriguing and fascinating series of stories detailing the loves and a ventures of a very engaging heroine.
This one especially is an amazing read with loose ends seemingly being tied up only to turn out to have been tied with a slip knot.

The emotional ups and downs the reader is led through by this very gifted writer make this story a very roller coaster like read. And the love scenes are burning hot, making one just excited to delve in and experience the feelings that Val is going through.
Cannot say enough about how much I really enjoy reading this series, and all the works of this author !

Review given after 2 chapters

A pretty brutal story of a love gone wrong. Very well written and articulated. The characters are believable and the dialogue is very realistic and down to earth.
The plot is pretty typical, but very readable.

All in all a good story.

A relic huntress review

A great concept for a fantasy story. And the quotes at the beginning of each chapter help set a mood before having even started reading.
This story is full of adventures, Interesting creatures , charming characters and witty dialogue. All in a world that Indiana Jones would have found himself home in.

A really brilliant read!

Aquarius Review

A great story told with some gifted characters full of charm wit and ingenuity!
Never a dull moment with this group of mischief makers!

Black Tie formal review

Let me start out by saying how much I like this title, combined with the cover adds to the story before one even begins the read!

This is a Brilliant love story being told by a quite adept writer who had a solid grasp of her characters. Thief feelings and desires.

And those feelings and desires are brought out in some really interesting descriptions and clever dialogue!

An excellent read!

Promise Review

A very Captivating read, full of interesting characters, situations and engaging characters..

One last Dance Review

An amazing bit of writing, the way you have captured the innocence of youth, and the feelings we all have experienced ourselves!
This review was given after the 3rd chapter so there is a lot more to come, and it promises to get even better.

Ps
Love the title and cover!!

A review of you

This review is early in the story, but the chapters written are powerful And Brilliant character studies!
I could feel myself in the story as I read , and was quite stimulated by the authors descriptive prose.
A great story! Looking forward to reading more!

Wedding Review

The story idea is to notch, the characters are fun and their dialogue is witty and engaging !
I had a lot of fun reading this!

My Review on the Storu

Most stories have grammatical issues , and most that do don’t have them take too much from the story. Your will improve with time.
That being said you have a solid story and some really interesting characters. Your writing is interesting and enjoyable.
So keep it up, you have a lot of talent!

Fairy tales and stories review

This collection of stories is a phenomenal effort by a gifted storyteller.
Cannot say how many nights since I started to read these tales that I fought off sleep just to”read only one more”
The best part is that this is an ongoing series... so there are new stories being added!
Age old tales told with a fresh new look, twists in plots, and some very scintillating, shall we say, human, and not so human, desires and sexual adventures..,
All of this awaits those inquisitive souls who will soon discover what classic gems will be found written within !!!

The creepy painting review

A really great idea for a series of stories!
The first the creepy painting has a good solid plot and some rather scary observations.

Looking forward to reading more from this author !

A wicked summer camp review

I found this to be a really quite imaginative and well plotted read.
A fresh idea is used to weave this tale of intriguing mystery.

Enjoy, I did !

A Romantic Stay

A very well written and poignant at times romance story. I loved the characters and their dialogue. It was a good read that kept my interest throughout.
A talented writer who knows her subject!

Rhymes of Evil review

First off in my opinion, the rules of grammar do not really apply for poetry. So any opinions on grammer pertaining to these poems is a none issue for me!

This collection is a splendid bit of storytelling in rhythm..
And evilly dark as promised

The Author does not disappoint. And theses dark gems are Really quite well written and envisioned.

A very interesting y

A very poignant, heartfelt look into a young girl’s journey in her younger years at school
Told with a sincere, open minded method of storytelling, a very compelling read !

Review for the Boyfriend Game

A really good romantic read. I loved the flow of this story , the twists and turns, ups and downs that went with it, not unlike real life..
A heartfelt story of life changing decisions, nail biting desires and a heroine who made it all wonderful!
The ending was perfect, and the epilogue really added to the storyline!
A highly enjoyable romantic story!

Chaos Reigns

A very interesting story, with some really well developed characters and witty dialogue between them.

The story was not finished at the time of this review, but so far the plot is very intriguing and It will be very enjoyable to see how it all plays out.

A great effort by an engaging Author!!

Until I met You

The mystery in this story keeps getting more intriguing... The characters keep getting more interesting
The action keeps sizzling in a most scintillating manner
Great writing effort by this Author whose words just flow in a most captivating manner

Criminal Intent , An amazing read!

This is an excellent idea you created based on my suggestion... Thank you for following through with such a Brilliantly written story !

The characters are very realistic, their game is absolutely captivating, the word play is excellent, the action is scintillating...

A marvelous read!

The Cafe

Really interesting read. Characters are well developed and the interaction between them is really well written.
A few issues with grammar and capitalization, nothing we don’t all have and easily fixed with editing
Cannot wait to read more!

our company , a Brilliant read!

This has been one really smashing read. The writing is intensely powerful. The characters are far to likable. the plot has a roller coaster ride full of twists , turns, slow climbs and pulsating drops. The love scenes are tingling , the banter and wordplay is strong and realistic....
The tale has only five chapters left as of this review, and the final mystery is still that ..., a gripping mystery that now has me on edge. I thoroughly have enjoyed this read, and I believe few would not !

A wild ride

A great effort by this author.
A very interesting plot with a few twists and some rather engaging characters!
A few issues with continuity and grammar, but nothing that all writers don’t have, and easily fixed
A solid story idea. Original and entertaining!

Game is on!

A very interesting and witty gem that is an engaging and enjoyable read of a game night that takes on sexual overtones.
I thoroughly enjoyed the plot and characters, though this is a short story and easily would have been even more enjoyable as a loner, more in-depth story by this engaging author.

Found, a good read

A really interesting plot and great storyline that is full of energy right down to the great ending that leads into the next book.

Alpha Story

Really great saga of power , love and all it entails.

I liked the way the characters seem so real, the way this Author’s words make one feel a part of the action !
The best part is that as of this review, there is much more story to go!

More than a causal friendship

A very well written story, an amazing account of a young girls first love.

Characters that one can fall in love with, and so as the reader is led along their path of discovery...

Amusing dialogue, chillingly real scenes of love and passion are subjects that are extremely well written and handled by this amazing Author !

An amazing journey

this story is far from over, which is great. But it’s been such an emotional ride, a Brilliant read, that I just was compelled to leave a review!
The characters are very engaging, one feels for them and heartstrings are tugged at their situations.

A really amazing writer, I would highly recommend this and reading this authors other works.

A brilliant work

This is the first fan fiction I’ve ever read, and it is very good. A romantic tale using the characters we all love. A well written storyline and engaging conversation and intriguing situations all describe this read.

A lot of plot twists

This is a really quite good read . A bit of grammer and word issues, but understandable considering this is not the authors native tongue, and with that in mind, what issues there are can be easily overlooked!
A good plot with imaginative twists. The characters are highly likable also ...
This story is just getting going.and promises to be an excellent read when finished

A very Good start

an excellent idea for a storyline, only the first chapter was written as of the time of this review, but it promises to be a good story and will get even better !

A Purely interesting Murder

This review was written after chapter two, just as the scene is still being set.

I really liked the cast of characters so far in this story, interesting with some rather witty banter .
It will definitely be interesting to see what parts they are to play in this mystery, and how it will end.
A great job of writing that only promised to get better!

An ok read

A few errors that need corrected,some issues with continuity

needs to do a better job of fact checking, especially Catholic Priests and Marriage.

Potentiality be an average read once this has been revamped.

Good luck and keep writing

Will revisit this review after work is completed

True Life Crime Stories , true facts fictionalized

I have really enjoyed reading these stories that have been posted so far. The last, Playground Puppies is based on a story from my book The Alluring Chase: The puppy encounter. I requested to the author to adapt in if his stories using this one, and he DID.
These stories are all accounts of actual crimes committed by criminals that were never caught. The names and situations have been slightly changed, that is why the author was able to use my story as a backdrop.
I would recommend anyone not too squeamish to read real life stories, definitely take the time to read these !

A brilliant series of shorts

This is an excellent collection of short stories, each one a different gem written to really make one feel a part of the storyline.
I only hope this Author sees fit to publish more.

Brilliant Detective Story

Mr. J.G. Reeder is on of Wallace's most a compelling characters, and this is the story that introduces this resourceful sleuth!

Brillinat Story

If you love a great mystery story with a compliment of endearingly written characters and a plot that will have you spinning, then look not any further....

A Really stimulating Collection

This is just another addition to the tantalizing stable of stories written by this author...
These stories are an in-depth .study on love, both in marriage and as consenting couples.
Witty and entreating plots and character dialogue help drive these tales to some rather satisfying and rewarding Erotically enhanced reads.

Wunderhein A brilliant writing effort !

Great dialogue between your characters, I like the flow of your story!
The wordplay and your brilliant descriptive observations, along with an interesting plot all help make this a great story , an an exciting lead in to the pored sequel....!

My a Wife Marie An Excellent Erotic Tale

Excellent imagery your story style gives us readers. And this one is no exception! A very interesting look into alternative forms of sexual encounters open to couples in long term relationships that have lost a bit of luster in their love making!

Very well written, with endearing descriptions and engaging characters!

Children of the Plague A very enjoyable read

Very well thought out and written story plot, almost like being in a great Sci-Fi movie. The characters are interesting and well written, with some great dialogue and scenes. I really liked the action . The story was not finished a of this review, which is great because that means there is a lot more coming. A very engaging story!

A very sweet love story

Love the writing style being used for this story. We know from the beginning how each of the main characters feel for the other, chapters ahead of the discovery themselves ! The descriptions of first love and what transpires is really engaging and well developed. Did not find much in the way of grammar errors, but then I am so much into reading this I may not have noticed!
The story is still underway as of this review, and I’m looking forward to reading more!

Two Halves of a whole Excellent story

This is a really great read for a police detective mystery. I love how the main characters are written so believable, and that they are even flawed. The story telling is fast paced and very descriptive. Though it is not a finished story at the day of this review, it definitely is a story that I would recommend following.

Brilliant Read

Excellent read, very well written characters and action. I have left some observations in comments so they really are not needed in a review. This is a powerfully engaging story with a lot of great elements and potential. Was not finished yet when I wrote this, but I see great things coming. I love the bit of mystery that is swirling around and it pulls one into wanting to read to the end !
Keep it up!

Excellent Story, Well written and plotted !

This is an incredibly good read! The author has created an intriguing world with endearing characters and and engaging plot. I did not see till the end done of the twists unfolding, which made it very interesting once they did . loved the ending and epilogue
Would highly recommend this as a good read no matter what your preference for story types, this one has a little of everything!

A really gripping read

I do not think this author is capable of writing a bad story, naughty yes, bad No!

This read is no exception and I feel ranks amongst his finest, and that’s no small praise.
This story is about a couple whose fire has dwindled, but still smolders. How they rekindled the romance in thier marriage, and the rather engaging results, is a brilliant tale that deserves to be read.

An engaging Read

Though not finished at the time of this review, this story is an excellent read, romance with a bit of mystery thrown in. The writers style is to the point, her characters speak well and with a great deal of soul. An excellent read!

An engaging mystery ..

This is a Brilliant story with a really good mystery plot that leaves on guessing, even though the author has planted clues in each chapter. The characters are engaging and well written, with witty dialogue and observations..

This story is still being written, so I have to wait a bit to find out what is on the forbidden floor of god mansion. But I think that therein lies the solution yo this fun riddle.

A very engaging story of romance

Excellent story teller, characters are interestingly written and given an equally Brilliant voice.

Not finished as yet, but had a storyline that will keep me hooked till the end!

interesting read, excellent plot and creative storyline of a new world

Very good first draft. Could use a little polishing, but one done has a great deal of potential for a great story. imaginative and interesting characters, and a bit of magic...

Excellent read

Very informative engaging story... I liked the plot and setting descriptions.

Quite an invigorating read

Well thought out, well written story.

Very Engaging Read

Very well written and plotted story. A roller coaster of emotions as told from several different characters POV

A Journey of young discovery

Brilliant read, a sometimes tender subject to write about that is quite winningly told by the author. No knight in shiny armor has ever rescued a more well written damsel !

Absolutely a Brilliant Read

An amazing lovely roller coaster of a ride in reading, emotional highs and lows as ably written though Eve’s point of view.

Amazing titles and phrases , a highly recommended read.

Brilliant read, spot on descriptions of characters and emotions

Rather like the writing style, the song lead ins, the descriptions of the characters and their emotions make for an endearing and intriguing read...
The more one reads, the more one wants from this author!
Amazing

Brilliant peak into another’s same Journey on a different path

There was an old show on Telly titled Shelly. Shelly was a man who stayed at university long enough to acquired to very different doctorate degrees. Shelly didn’t have any use for the degrees, he just didn’t want to leave school and join the world outside.

The main character of Dave is a shadow of Shelly,brilliantly and powerfully portrayed by this author !

Very well written, characters and the passions between them just grab at the reader

Brilliant bit of observations and extremely engaging scenarios. Almost like being a fly in the wall for those of us whom have never, outside of writing in a diary, experienced multiparty sex..

Brilliant ride of emotions and play that are too seldom explored

As close to the real experience of multiplayer romances one can get. I can see why this was a recommended read.. I do love writing role play, though mine may not be as intense as these, this does give one ideas.. and that for me is the mark of a great storyteller!

Very emotional ending also !

A rather interesting read.

This is a rather interesting read, like the story is being told by the disjointed thoughts in a killers head. It is not an easy read by any means, much like Finnegan’s Wake . But their is a story there , for those willing to take on this adventure

Interesting idea for a series of shorts

I see some good comments on ideas for future stories, although my own may be rather silly.
Please keep writing

Very well written story

Great command of language and imagery.

The is the second book of yours I’ve read and if I dare say you handled your subjects in a rather intriguing way

Very interesting exploration

Brilliant writing, very imaginative and seductive. It’s fun to indulge a Little by reading something that , at least I, would never try in real life.(smiles) partner swapping that is....

Brilliant story

Brilliant read. Mystery suspense romance and rogues. How could it not be!

Brilliant storyline, of discovery that one is uniquely different from the everyday

Actually really good detail and developed characters. Definitely a good start , leaves one quite curious as to what happens next.

Enjoyable read

Brilliant effort at storytelling, read it so far in one sitting and was not dissatisfied

Characters are life like and well written

Several cliff hanger endings leave one intrigued to read on.

Very interesting story

Excellent story line , engaging characters and interesting plot
Will definitely read on!
Only a few small, very minor. Errors in spelling and descriptions.
But then, the more on writes the better one becomes
Again excellent work
Cheers.

Intriguing mystery

Could use a little work on sentence structure and clearer descriptions..
That being said, this is a witty mystery so far that has engaging characters and what may be a red herring in the making.

Heartfelt writing

Written from the heart and dealing with real life issues these stories are small insightful gems that really need to be read and appreciated.

Brilliant romance story

Brilliant storytelling, characters we’re well written, charming and engaging. Though I’m more of a mystery freak, this certainly held my interest

Brilliant read

Well written, plot was certainly interesting and engaging. Long, but kept my interest

Very good read

Excellent read, very descriptive and characters are well developed and fun to get to know. An excellent plot line

Excellent read

Well written , characters are interesting and engaging, some issues with syntax, but then anyone whose read my stories knows I do the same . Perfection is not necessary when telling a tale.

This one certainly deserves to be followed.

Stephen King Worthy

Excellent bit of work overall!

Brilliant Read..

I gave a lower score on the plot only because after the first two chapters I was hoping it would be a bit clearer. But this is only my early thoughts …
Other wise it is very well written, descriptive an dwell delveloped characters!

Brilliant Read

Very well plotted with a rather nice turnaround of events.

The wordplay between the characters , as well as the beginning mystery of what was actually taking place, kept one reading with interest till the end.

Brilliant read

Brilliant read. Plot was well developed, characters clearly defined and interesting