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Drawn to death

An interesting book requiring more dialogue to make it sharper. Don't tell the reader so much. Let the dialogue allow the reader to make their own judgements about a situation. Sex scenes were well done but less was needed. Cut the prologue and shorten the scenes with Victoria. Generally well written. Generally enjoyable and worth reading.

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Doll House

I thought the story progressed well. The dialogue was realistic and effective. Many unexpected situations. A very emotional read and thought out well.

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