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Loved It!

It made me think, it was amazing to see the plot twist about the family. Also I have a few questions regards future chapters so I can get my imagination going. However in the art of not wishing to spoil it for others I will kindly ask that you email me at the address bellow so I can get the answers.
carlymccarthy42005@gmail.com
-Carly

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LOVED IT

It was/is great

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Misonseption

Like, i know the stupid Americans part was for the story and all but we attacked cause they were harboring a terrorist so like. I didn't have an attachment or any feelings toward it till that part in the story but i like your grammar an punctuation.

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