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The story is filled with so much redundancy. It is written in a script-like manner, with the names of the characters written at the very beginning of each dialogue, and at the same, the author still places a dialogue tag at the end of most conversations. I think it would be a bit better if the names are removed. Allow the characters to speak for themselves through showing rather than telling.

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