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Anastasia

It's an okay story overall. The lie Anastasia came up with about the man seemed inappropriate to a degree since usually people wouldn't lie about being assaulted. The writing was vivid but it lacks connectivity.

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Die for Love

The beginning paragraphs start out well, but they get confusing from there. Not much makes sense narratively and the children don't sound like children from what little I read. Annie gets kidnapped and then let go and no one questions her behavior or where she's been. The rape scene was uncomfortable and frankly uncalled for as well as the author's attention to Annie's breasts for some reason.

Overall, it was a confusing, punctuation missing, plot dragging story. I didn't feel much for Annie because I barely knew her and it felt like her only purpose was to be a damsel in distress.

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