Celeste Lavin

Santiago

18 yr old girl that loves writing!

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Amazing!

I fell in love with the story instantly!

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Awesome book!

This book is one of the best I’ve ever read!
I loved it❤️

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Excellent plot

Awesome story! I hope you continue writing:)

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Best. God. Damn. Story. Ever.

This story was just... wow. I can’t wait for another book to be released. It’s truly amazing the way its written, the characters, the plot, eveything! 👏🏻👏🏻

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Doesn’t make sense

The story itself advances too fast, so you are not able to understand whats going on. The characters behavior are weird (robotic like) and the descriptions are “not natural”. Too much blank spaces.
If I sound mean, sorry. It’s just my way to tell how to improve.

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