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Holy Cow

I devoured this story right up. That was really well written. When the novel gets published, I am definitely going to read the whole thing. There was one error in chapter 4 I think (believe it was the wrong use of your/you're but can't remember exactly) but I read it so fast I kind of blurred the individual chapters together into one long plot of awesome. Bravo on your hard work! I enjoyed it!


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