Castila Rosch

I love reading fantasy, historical fiction, and romance. I enjoy writing too. I'm on Wattpad @Castila_Rosch

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Great start!

This story has got potential, it just needs editing and a few changes. Otherwise, good job.

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Unique story line

Your plot is well thought of and everything flows so well. Your characters are well developed and a reader can easily relate to then. I like how in every chapter we get to learn a new thing. This is a really great story!

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Wow!

This is a really great start. Just one chapter got me wanting more. A few punctuation missing but otherwise, good job.

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Wow!

I have a feeling this is going to turn out to be a wonderful novel, just the start has me wanting to read more. This is a beautiful piece, keep writing.

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Love it!

First of all, I like how you let your story unfold. It is clear you had this well planned out. I like the unique concept of vampires. Your descriptions, pacing and flow are just wonderful.

Something to check on is your tenses, you seem to switch between present and past. Stick to one. And your blurb could use some editing to be more perfect.

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Wow!

This is a beautiful piece of work. The flow and pacing are just wondering. The story line is also well thought of. Good job

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Wow!

I love your story plot, the flow and your pacing. This story is just beautifully written. Good job!

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I'm teary-eyed

This book is so funny. It got me laughing all through

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Love it!

This is a really interesting story. And I like the flow and the pacing of it. Good job

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Love it!

I love the storyline and the flow in general. I would have preferred the flashbacks to be the prologue instead of insert. But everything else is great

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Wow!

This is a very good book. The story line is well thought of and the pacing is really great. It's obvious you are a talented writer. Just check on punctuation and this will be perfect.

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Unique storyline!

I love the idea of this werewolf story, it is unique. You've built your own world, unlike every werewolf cliché books I've read. Good job

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Love it!

From the prologue and the 3 chapters, this story is evidently going to be great. Good job! I'm eager to see Mia's love story

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Love it!

This is an interesting story you have. I've never read horror but your book gives me the urge to keep going. Good job

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Wow!

Two chapters yet the story is already great. Your narration is really good making the story flow so well. Good job!

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Love it!

I love vampire and I like the your storylines. Your characters are great. Just a few punctuation errors but otherwise good job

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Great story!

This is a great story with potential. Just a few things to work on to make it perfect.

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Great story in the making!

Just one chapter yet you've captured the attention of the readers. Can't wait to see what a great story this turns out to be

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Wonderful storyline!

I love the storyline of this book. Its clear you took your time to build your world and I love it. The flow is great and I hardly got anything to fault the story. One thing to check on is your prologue. I would suggest you keep it simple (don't introduce your whole world on it) it's a little confusing

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Great story!

This is a story that got potential. The story line is great. Keep it up

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Unique storyline

I like the idea you have for this novel. Even with only 3 chapters up, I want to know what's going to happen next. Can't wait for the next update

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Love it!

This is definitely a book any romance fun should read. The story is intriguing making a reader want to know more. A few grammatical errors but otherwise good job

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Love it!

I loved every bit of the story. It got me hooked all through. Your characters are well written that readers can connect with them. A few punctuation and grammatical errors but otherwise good job

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Wonderful style of writing!

Your writing is pleasantly wonderful and I can not fault it at all. You evidently have a grasp on how to let your story unfold and how to manage your pacing. The plot is excellent and well thought out. It is evident that you are a talented writer.

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JeetZ

This is a great story idea you have but it needs a little working. Check on the inline comments.

I would suggest the first and second chapter to be a prologue then the flashback to act as the beginning of the novel.

Good luck in your writing!

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Unique storyline

The plot is well thought of and the flow is great. This is a really unique story. I love the descriptions in the story. Just a few grammatical errors but those could be worked on by editing

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