Ralph Chordes-Plex

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Indiscreet Treat!

If you can handle gore, this is the kind of thriller that doesn't delay in feeding you a tantalizing treat, while countlessly ripping it back from between your teeth, providing the full flavor but not allowing you to stomach the relationships with any assuredness. These evidence the kind of jaws that bite all the way through with an aura of paradox I would call "indiscreet discretion."

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Sophisticated Strike

Great character variety is the biggest thing that stands out, along with emotional observation (without overstraining it): a fluid balance! The names are very practical, however stereotypical which is a slight drawback but just a very minor issue, as is with the tavern trope (and why does Screech run when he's part bird, I don't recall hearing his wings were damaged?) But rather trivial matters in the scope of things, I'm looking forward to seeing the Plot further blossom and entangle!

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